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for Night Flight

by Massanie

schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
they're going to have a serious job winning har's trust, cause right now, he doesn't trust them at all. Why would he, i mean, they've mucked it up from the beginning and now they have to try and undo the damage. That won't be easy.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Will Harry turn to Ives and Adler? he does need someone.
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9 is awesome! Especially the first part. LOL.
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, they didn't handle that well at all, did they. I hope har will be alright. At least he's willing to stay for now.

Good grief, so Sev DOES know of har's childhood, and he STILL sees him as Potter Spawn? well, shesh, biased much. I hope Ives can help har accept his new self. Ives sounds like he was pretty feisty and has no ulterior motive.

I think har could be good for the couple, but they need to gain his trust and learn his trigger points. Otherwise, like Sev said, Har WILL flit.

If they can gain his trust, i think they will be good for har too. Though it goes against the grain, since he has never learned to trust others to carry the load when he can't, when har learns to surrender and that his Dom's WILL take care of him, he'll find release in being able to give over all worries and concerns and just let himself be cared for for a bit. I probably wouldn't be long since Har isn't naturally submissive and it will take some time to gain his trust enough for that but it would do him good not to have the weight of the world on his shoulders for a bit. To be able to put aside the hero mantle and rest.
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is coming along. Great job.
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh poor Harry it seems he still is only wanted for his power. He deserves true love after the whole and everything. Hope he finds it.
person js
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite HP story of the moment.
person jami_lee
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Bad Harry!! I hope blaise and draco get him.
person djaddict
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Liking this more and more.

Glad Harry got a little explanation but really want him to get more. He needs it. LOVE that Blaise and Draco admitted to each other that they want Harry.

Oh, btw, up there somewhere, it's a "rhetorical" question not "rhetoric". ;)
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now if they could just stop taunting Harry. They've got to earn his trust and woo him. He's in a word... delicate. Emotionally fragile.