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*beams. I do my best. (checked the art work btw, and it's awesome. Har's markings are really beautiful. I'd put them up there with Mazoko demon Yusuke from Yu Yu Hakusho. wow, unfolded those wings are huge.)

Winces, those war tweaked hair trigger reflexes and instincts can't be much fun to live with. Are hars critter instincts responding to the two doms with him to make him relax. Can they sense the pair mean him no harm? I suppose har isn't trusting those particular instincts because they're new and he doesn't know enough about them?

So is the Vyl gene only carried through the male line? Damn, what a waste. I'm glad ives has managed to talk har round into giving them a chance. That letter was indeed probably not the wisest course of action, but that was mostly knee jerk reaction to being confined and the Slyths mishandling of the situation.

The laws dealing with subs are truly awful though. so open to abuse and misuse. It wouldn't surprise me if a lot of previous subs suicided rather than put up with it. Ives particular Malfoy must have been very patient to coax him around after the initial deal.

you mentioned previously that a lot of them ended up getting killed. if they were such a great resource, why weren't they better cared for?

Awesome beginning to a new story! It's seems very interesting so far and I hope to read more of it soon! = )

love it, more please.

Eeeeeeeeeeeeee new update! I'm so excited that Harry's realistically agreed to stick around with Blaise and Draco. I've said it before and I'll say it again: you have managed to write a submissive Harry that doesn't come off as out of character. I am sooooooo looking forward to Blaise and Draco having their wicked way with him ;) I'm also looking forward to the repercussions of the letter, and Harry's meeting with Ron and Hermione. Hermione verifying the information Harry's received so far is going to be a really, REALLY good moment. I can't decide if I want the "I told you so" or the first bit of physicality between the three more.

Write more please!!! *showers you with internet cookies as bribes*

What I don't get si why he would want Ron and Hermione's opinions so much considering his feelings in the first chapter.

Really enjoying this.

I really like this story and i hope you keep at it this is an interesting way of connecting Harry with Malfoy and Wesley!

51 days to fall in love with Draco and Blaise. I don't think it'll happen until he gets to Hogwarts. Hopefully it won't be too late by then.

oh wow!! I came across your story today and read it. Brilliant!! please update soon

thank you and kudos

Carol

awesome story, i absolutely love it! cant wait to read more and see how you develop it further

So, I really, really am enjoying this. I like Blaise and Draco together and the idea of them seducing Harry intrigues me. I'd really like to see more in the future.