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February 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM
It was good
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March 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I just sat down and read this, over the course of two days. I love the concept and how you've taken them just enough out of character that it fits with their character.
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November 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay I have just finished inhaling this story and I love it! I love that it was a slow build and sort of realistic in the way you built up their relationship and the way you used magic. I really hope that someday you find the motivation and time to continue writing this story. I will be waiting and watching for an update. Good luck and happy writing!
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February 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa is laughable, she so desperately wants to be seen as a strong independent women, but truth is she can't do anything without her husband approval, that's why she can even standup to him when he so cruelly turned on his own son. As for Amalyne, I truly don't like her or Narcissa, and I hope they never get to Harry, please update chapter 31 soon.
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September 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope there will be more. This story is one of the better ones that I have read of late. And I read a lot on here.
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March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wondered how you would get him out of there.
Brilliantly worded descriptions allowing me to put myself in the courtyard with all the action.
Keep writing as life allows...
Brilliantly worded descriptions allowing me to put myself in the courtyard with all the action.
Keep writing as life allows...
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January 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I know I wanted them to die, but that you did it in such a cruel way made me sick. Harry will be destroyed when he realizes what he has done. You went too far here in my opinion.
Regards Lyoness
Regards Lyoness
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January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Though this isn't a pairing or storyline I'd usually read, I found myself unable to turn away from this story for most of the day. I'm not quite done reading what you have written yet, but you can bet I'll be back for more, Well written, believable and interesting. Bravo!
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December 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good story and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. There have been a few spelling and grammatical mistakes though, the main one that bothered me the most is that instead of limbs (as in an arm or a leg) you have been using the word limps (referring to a lack of stiffness). Other than that it is a great story and I look forward to more.
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would not hsvr thought that I would like this but yes it's so good, hope to see more soon.....