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for Unspoken Desires

by Lumos

person Ash
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I've check back every year after a month from your last update. I've yet to see another story with even remote similarities to your plot line. I was just wondering if you intended to update the story at all?
person Sara
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I miss this fic, any chance of an update one day?
person Genuka
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is clearly a well thought out story. i look forward to watching it grow.
person Sara
schedule June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really miss this fic, it was one of my favourites :)
person Sarah
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story, it is brilliant to see Severus in a caring capacity. I like how you are developing the characters. I can't wait for more chapters.
person Gabi_P_M
schedule December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I'm really curious to know the rest!
xoxo
Gabi
person star
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know, I think Lucius as a Healer isn't too far fetched when one thinks about it. He does have the attitude of some of them. :D
person treana
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lucius as a healer. Lol. But anyway, I always like me to have a little Lucius in a story, so I'm down with him being there. I'm very glad this story is back. It's very cute and I love the set up. Seriously can't wait for those lemons. ;) Severus needs to get some, even if the circumstances are a little suspect. I hope Remus grows to love him. Anyway, will definitely keep an eye out for that update. ^^
person Sara
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, is it wrong that the last part kinda made me laugh? I totally wasn't expecting Lucius Malfoy to turn up. Great to see this updated and I hope everything is OK in RL :)
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter really love a sub Remus. Only one thing I have to complain about is the format for chapter three makes it hard to read. Otherwise I can't wait for more...