rate_review Reviews

as far as pairings go i like harry/tonks harry/susan harry/susan/hanna harry/fluir harry/fluir/gabby an as far as guys harry/collin/dennis. an yes you can mix those pairings up any way you want such as harry/gabby/dennis since those would be the youngest 2 with harry or harry/tonks/fliur those being the oldest females with harry.

as to how fliur and gabby end up at harry's fliur's father could get death threats against his family, an since fliur is going to england already she is talked into taking gabby along.

tonk's could end up being given the task of being harry's personal bodyguard since she can change her looks no one would know it was her guarding him.


as far as the creevey brothers go they could get their home attacked by deatheaters but not be at home at the time so their family is safe but now have no place to live. an the creevey brothers would need little to no spell to be willing to have sex with harry.

as far as susan goes you could have her aunt join the order of the fried chicken and she gets dragged along to the meeting and stuck with the other kids during the meeting.

The story just gets better and better! I love it! Are you going to end up having Harry release them or is it a permanent thing? And is he ever going to find out what the book is?

This story is the highlight of my day when it's uploaded.

i have no idea why people seem to want to stick harry with people old enough to be harry's parents. if that is really what you all want then why not just have harry use the room of requirements so that he could have sex with the real thing as in have it create copies of his parents for him to have sex with.

as far as sex acts and toys go bondage with ropes or handcuffs would be nice as well as double ended dildos for the girl on girl action an as far as girl on girl go how about gabby/fliur or susan/hanna or tonk's/fliur. an since tonk's can change her looks how about her making herself look like harry and have 2 harry's in on the fun or even harry and tonk's alone while she looks like harry thereby making it harry on harry.

Loved the note at the end almost as much as the story itself (note, I still prefer the story). And I adored how Harry 'chose to react' for Ron. Absolutely hysterical! I love the M/M and even your M/F is great, Ginny's scene had me dying in laughter, and your portrayal of Hermione was spot on how I would imagine her, even under some kind of lust-spell. I can't wait for more!

Interesting-- Porn With Plot? Possibly. I do wonder if Harry has been "infected" by the book, or if perhaps it's a creature-inheritence come into being. Seems similiar to an incubus, feeding off desire and sexual release...and yet, Harry seems to have an overwhelming amount of control over others. One of my personal likes in impregnation fics, so I wonder what reprecussions his abilities and new outlook might have on the dwindling wizarding population. Even if the heightened sexual awareness only turns others to their potential partners and not towards Harry, I could see lots of pregnancies in the next year! Which leads to the potential question of m-pregs....

**Personal Theory** If wizards can naturally become pregnant, then the wizarding world would have no real qualms about homosexuality. If wizards can become pregnant via use of an invented charm or potion, then the wizarding world might still habour some lingering resentment and taboo of unnaturalness surrounding homosexuality. If wizarding pregnancies are almost-impossible/unheard of or impossible, then the wizarding world would be quite prejudice against homosexuality as it prevents the bloodlines from continuing on to the next generation.

Then I wonder about Harry. If it is a creature inheritance, what is his grouping called? Circle doesn't sound right, even though it's fun to make spoof off of Harry's "inner circle"... Pod... nesting... pack... Doesn't quite sound right either, but then neither does "harem". And the question--will Harry shag whoever takes his fancy but only keep a select few, allowing the others to go off into their normally scheduled lives? Would those in his "inner circle" being engaged to others within the circle, allowing a smoke-screen of "normalacy" into their lives?

Either way, you've allowed for a whole cast slew of possible pairings/partnerships! May I request you not forget Shack in the remaining summer holiday? Oh, and NO ELDER Weasleys! Please, please, please! You can throw in every other Weasley except Arthur or Molly with Harry, and I'd be fine. Really don't like it when someone tries to throw those two in with Harry--which, for me, is actually pretty strange, because I can read pretty much every other pairing. [thinks] Well, with the exception of Umbitch and Fudge with Harry. [shivers]

~AR

Harry/Molly Weasley Maybe?

I'd like to see some Harry/Kingsley. Have Harry make Kingsley wear a vibe all day and when he comes back he rides him to orgasm (Harry's) several times, but doesn't let Kingsley come until the next day, or longer.

Harry/Remus. Harry treats Remus like an animal, putting him on a leash and making him sit at his feet whenever they're in the same room together. Make him suck and luck on Harry's toes, jerk off on them and then lick them clean again.

Harry/Fenrir Greyback. Harry shaves Fenrir's whole body bare before piercing his nipples and tonguing and twisting them while fully impaled on Fenrir's cock, not moving just squeezing his muscles until Fenrir comes.

Harry/Oliver/Viktor. Oliver sits back against a wall, feet planted on the ground with Harry's back pressed into his chest and his knees spread over Oliver's arms. Oliver raises and lowers Harry while Viktor blows him.

This is good. Although, the Petunia/Dudley thing was really squicky. As for the Order, not just Severus and Remus but also Emmaline Vance, Hestia Jones, Bill Weasley, Fleur Delacour and the Weasley twins and Tonks. Maybe Shacklebolt, if you can fit him in. Among the Hogwarts staff: Professor Sinistra, because she's probably one of the few staff members who are relatively young and attractive, the rest are old or middle-aged, except for Snape who is relatively young but not necessarily attractive and maybe Madam Hooch. By accident, during a quidditch game, like Harry accidentally crashes into her. And just for S and G's: Draco Malfoy. I want to see how much he fights it before he gives in to Harry's dominance. Because Harry will definitely make him pay for all the crap he's pulled over the years.

Okay if you do a Harry/ Molly Weasley thing or a Harry/ Fenrir Greyback, I will stop reading this. I will also stop reading this if you have Harry treating Remus like crap, Remus' life has been crappy enough, I want Harry to make love to Remus, not dominant him or a least let Remus dominate Harry. Severus and Draco on the other hand, have helped make Harry's life miserable at Hogwarts. Have Harry dominate them, although for Severus, not for long(I just can't see Snape as a sub). And for the love of God, have Albus Dumbledore be too old for sex and McGonagall too. Have Hagrid's giant heritage make him immune.

This is awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter and Hermione.

I love Harry being dominant.

People I would suggest Harry does would be:

Fred and George

Tonks and Remus (Maybe during Christmas break)

That would be so hot