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person hpotter
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot

Lovvved that Harry and Kingsley scene.

Not such a fan of Ginny dominating Harry but thats just me.

Please make the special character either be Tonks or Sirius.

Love whrn Harry is dom

Please bring the next chaptet very soon before I pop
person Sara
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, was really hoping for a scene with the trio and it happened! And Kingsley....what a machine ;) Can't wait for next chapter (Lupin's my favourite)
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I am liking this Harry! A dominating bottom! xDD

Love it!!
person Bybytte
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter ! I can't help but be impressed by the speed with which you write and update your story. I really do enjoy reading it. I also am very impatient to read Snape/Harry. It's too bad that Sirius is dead, as Sirius/Snape would have been lovely too. As for parings, I don't have any I don't want to see other than maybe Harry/Dumbledore... I'm afraid that would probably scar me for life lol.

bisouxxx
person Joey88
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really am enjoying the story

Like your thinking of doing Harry/Fleur/Bill

I like it more when Harry is in control but that's just me. I would like for Harry to take Tonks forcebly if that is possible

Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully you'll reward us for our loyalty and release another this week ;)
person bill560682
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
now as far as my review conserning the room of requirements and harry having sex with his parents or at least he and lily there was a former headmaster that was a member of the house of black which would mean he was also likely a teacher and deputy headmaster so would have had a great deal of time to study the room and the magic that makes it work. so there is nothing that says he did not build his own room of requirements at the black family home.
person Sara
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, Harry's a quick mover ;) I wonder who sent Harry the book originally?
person Sara
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was totally hot. Might need to cool myself off ;)

Since Kingsley is on the menu already I shan't suggest him. I'll throw in Luna as I think she'll have a lot of fun lol.

I did see someone suggest seeing a doggy!Remus on his knees etc. Can I second that? There's something both hot and oddly cute about that :)
person Ronslady23
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story! I loved how in-charge Harry is about his actions and his fearless sexuality. I also liked how Harry really wanted to enjoy Ron and please him and the warm looks they shared afterwards. It just shows how the inheritance didn't change the love he has for his friends. I love it and keep up the wonderful work! And kudos for telling those picky and pushy reviewers off!

And since everyone is throwing ideas in the hat, golden trio play is always awesome! :D
person ChaosLady
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First-I enjoyed this chapter. Although, it was a surprise to find that Ginny is a budding Dominatrix, it made it better. Second- I don't threaten, I promise. Considering that the pairings and kinks I mentioned in my last review would be a such a turn off- that I would simply stop reading your story because... I don't flame. I always try for constructive criticism because I would want YOU to do the same for ME, considering I am the author of a few fanfics myself (just not on this site). I just found the thought of a Harry/Fenrir pairing distasteful and Remus put on a leash does not fit in with his character, considering that he hates his wolf. When I read another readers review concerning those pairings I had such strong feelings on the subject, that I panicked and wrote that ill-thought out review. If I had known you had such a contrary personality, I would have used reverse psychology on you. ^_-