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A very refreshing sort of story. You don't often see Harry in the controlling position. I liked it.
A bit sad that it kind of veers away from that. After the first couple of chapters Harry almost never takes a dominant role (the whole 'dom from the bottom' thing is something I've never really got so that's just my perception) and I had to skip the bits with Ginny entirely because it was like whatever happened to Harry only makes him think he's in control when really it's some sort of curse/infection that makes him want what other people want. Maybe that's the secret under plot? :)

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You know that feeling when you just want to read some absolute smut? That's when I usually go back to this fic and then I relish in the absolute debauchery that is your story. It gets better with every chapter and I still hope that one day you'll post more. (the more depraved part of my brain really wants that full moon!) ..oh well. I'll be reading this again the next time just regular lemons can't do the trick, because it really is perfect for when you're feeling a little depraved ;)

Make Harry get fucked by the weasley twins, and Cormac

FAN!~

Great

Hello. Nice fic. About Fleur, how about having Harry buy her on Knocturn Alley ? I mean someone, a DE, could capture her because she's a Veela, but after learning that her father is an important French politican (could be a minister), the captor could freak out and try to sell her as soon as possible, even if untamed (lower price). The other sister and her mother could share her fate or be blackmailed.
It's just a thought, but I think it'd be the best if the Veela were fighting against being dominated/enslaved(same mechanism like with fighting unwanted suitors).
A modern Veela thinks that she must be the one in charge and zealously try to establish her "alpha" position (could be rised that way from child as it could be a defense against Veela past mistakes when they were enslaved by wizards).

very interesting idea, I can't wait till Harry gets back to Hogwarts! One question though: are there no limits to Harry's ability? For example, doesn't he get tired if he uses too much magic in one go?
Can't wait for updates! :D

I would love to see some the weasly twins. You could say that because they started 7th but didn't finish that they are obligated to redo it. And could you do a little bit of urine play? it just seems like it would fit with some of the S&M stuff going on.

Hiya, LOVE this story!
Would really like to see Snape and Harry and a girl, if possible (sorry I'm a bit of a snape fan haha)
Like a really naughty detention or something with Harry and Hermione?
Thaankkkks :) xx