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for The Dark Green Eyed Lion

by leobutler

person Leslie
schedule March 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
good start, interesting, hope you continue/finish
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please inform me when the next chapter is up via email :) angellucifur@ gmail.com , Awesome story! keep up the good work!
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
write more is really good
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it was a little tricky to fallow at a point or two but other that it's good
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It seems good but the way the time frame is set is confusing me greatly. I can't tell what year Harry is in cause the wording seems to bounce it all over the place.
person Kimi Lowe
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't wait for more...
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please please UPDATE!!!!!
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this and want more please soon lol
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. :D Please update soon.

xoxo,
kitkat
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it feels a little rushed and there were a few typos but i think it's got potential.