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Too long?! You kidding?! It was so tremendously satisfying! I loved every moment of it; Severus' struggle to understand his sons' relationship, Laine's thoughts on Hale and their relationship and even the flashbacks from the past. It was amazingly well done and I was holding my breath the whole time I was reading the chapter. Thank you so much for such an amazing beginning of the day. Take care and till next time :)

You chapters are perfect! Never change them!

LOVE the length of your chapters!! Love this story so glad you updated!!! Hope you continue soon :)

I'm reading and enjoying. Just wanted you to know.

Aww I'm so glad Laine went back for hale. I love this story! Please update soon!!

It's a wonder hey aren't wilder & crazier than they are! In fact it's a miracle they are still alive. Laine walked carrying Hale from New York to Pennsylvannia? Ohhh kay. But loving the story and Laine & Hale so its all good.

Very good story. I really understand and like the emotional bond and the behaviour Laine and Hale are having. It's interesting to read it and I hope you update soon!

Well I must say that I am very excited that you updated again! I was afraid this story might be abandoned, so this chapter was a lovely surprise!
I must say that this chapter left me feeling Hale's pain/angst. I am really hoping that there will be some warm/fluffy cuddling or something in the next chapter for him and Laine. (or even some sexiness and then some fluffiness, hey I can dream right?) I understand Laine's need for control and complete trust, but hasn't Hale proved that now, I can just feel his anxiety over Laine's threat about their relationship and it is practically making me cringe. He needs a hug, and so does Laine really.
The part with Remus was both interesting and wonderful. I was really worried after last chapter about Remus, I just love his character and I wouldn't want anything bad to happen to him, hasn't he been through enough in life yet? Also think that this should be neat for him and Laine to have animagus forms. The opportunity for them to spend some time together as Remus teaches Laine about it could provide time for Laine to see that Remus is probably one of his biggest allies. Right now you have shown that Laine sees him as a threat because of his interest in Hale, but I would think that if he took the time to realize it, he would see that Remus is one of the few people that cares more about Hale's well being than the rest of the wizarding worlds and thus Remus would make a good ally.
Can I just say I really, really don't like Gloria?! Erg, I have tried to like her, and her kindness towards Hale helps, but she is just so combative and nasty. Poor Armand being stuck with a mother like that.
I am also very suspicious of Linc, where is he? and what is he up to?!
Severus is also really pissing me off. Not sure what you should do with him. I almost think he should try to separate them and see how well that goes over. Severus may be powerful, but I don't think he could contend with a seriously pissed off Laine so I don't think it would go the way he thinks it would. But then Laine would no doubt never trust Severus and would leave with Hale. However someone needs to put him in his place. He may have biologically contributed to Laine's existence but he has never been apart of his life and he can't just show up now and expect that they can play house. Also he doesn't seem to realize that he would just be hurting Hale by separating them.
ok, sorry for that really long review, in short: please update again soon! and can we have some warm/fuzzy cuddly moments with our boys? pretty please

Oh, I was so happy to see this update!!!!

The information on the dire wolves was really cool. I loved how you worked that into the story. I am so very glad you decided not to make Laine a werewolf. I'm concerned, though, that Severus will never understand what drives Laine's and Hale's relationships. It seems he just becomes more determined to separate them the more he learns. I'm anxious to see how that enfolds. I LOVE this story! I was just thinking about it the other day; wondering when we could expect another update, and here it is! Thank you so much!

No! No werewolf for Laine. He's had waaay too much in his life to deal with and still does. Since you're he author you can be kind.
Remus is a wonderful wereolf. He must have SOME control & can save Laine from himself & Laine's own self. Came across this story today when you updated. It is sooo different and well written!!! Every character is so well done. Armand is OC isn't he? But Gloria is talked about?
Please keep going & update soon. I'm afraid Dumbledore's brother is going to bring harm to them. I don't trust Dumbledore & can't stand him.