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Really hoping you are continuing with this - it’s excellent . Re your question about Chapter Length - I prefer Chapters this length as you can really get into the storyline . 

Please email me when you update Morningstorm70@yahoo.com

Response to the "Are My Chapters Too Long" question; Fuk No! I love how long your chapters are. So, I read this fic after the one your doing with Draco as Laine and this is pretty amazing. I can't wait to see where both of these go (are you still working on this one?) One really cool aspect is the sub/dom relationship. I know there's certain types and subtypes and what not but I've never seen it described this way before. It's bloody fascinating! The whole incest part is weird but I do see how this relationship is necessary and while it's not completely healthy it is beneficial for both boys (and since incest is mostly wrong due to genetic reasons and two boys can't really have kids I'm not gonna throw a fuss about it. I think they're cute together) I have to ask where you learnt all this information about dom/sub relationships. Was it an online search? Fan fics? Personal relationship? Also, about the triad in Shadows Within the Light thank you. Because that relationship was in there I'm actually entering into a triad with a type of sub/dom relationship in it. So, um, thanks for that. It feels awkward to be thanking you for that but still, thanks (though you probably will never read this or response so that's chill) Please update soon, or at least within a month (2 months?) I love your work! Your handle on the human psyche is, practically, orsgamic (I have a thing for well written human psyche ) So, thank you for that as well. You're an amazing person who writes fucked up shit, keep on keeping on!

Love this story can't wait for more

No, your chapters aren't too long, in my opinion.

I just finished reading all of what you have posted and I can't tell you how enthralled I am by this story! I just love it. I love Laine's devotion to Hale and the relationship that they've worked out that has kept Hale's mind from fracturing beyond anything that resembles sanity. I love Hale's magic being used for healing. I love that Laine is such a fierce and talented protector - because both of them have incredibly strong magic, albeit so different in nature. I love that Severus is having such a hard time with it but is finally coming round to see that the relationship that Hale and Laine have keeps them from breaking. I love Armand. Full Stop! I want to know why he understands the boys so completely - especially Laine, but I do love Armand no matter what. I love that Hale healed Moony! That was epic, and the unicorn helped...epic! I really hope that you haven't given up on this, but I wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed what you have posted.

Thanks so much!

Chapters are never too long. :)
I'm glad that Sev is coming around. Laine and Hale don't need another obstacle in their path.
What was going on when Armand said he was going to leave for Spain? What did Laine figure out? Was he getting a sense of Armand's relationship with Severus? And why does Laine care?
That last scene was beautiful btw.

I hope I get a chance to read the next chapter!
Thanks for posting this
Someone

I am normally not much of a fan of these types of stories, but I just couldn't stop reading, and now I am eager for more!

I just wanted to say that I think the way you write this story and the feelings you depict are marvelous and at least to me feels deep and real ^^

I also like the storyline and the way you portray(?) the personalities of both Hale and Laine as well as Severus.

So good luck to you and your muse and I'll hope you hang on to her for a long time to come ;)

-Michelle-

I love this fic. It's so gut wrenchingly painful but so well written! I've been reading it for a while and just re read it all again. I know you must be busy and I know you must have things to do in real life but I do hope you update it soon because it would be amazing to get new chapters!

love this story, and no your chapters are not too long! I cannot wait to read more!!!