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person Mark's Pet
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh...so close! But another cliffy *Argh*. You can be such a tease!?!?!?!

But the anticipation is ramping me up *starting to drool*. I can't wait until Hermoine gives in; then it will be too late for Harry to save her. By the way, Ron does not seem all that keen on saving Hermoine OR the hunt. Is there something that you are not telling us about Ron?

I await your next posting with bated breath *actually, heavy breathing*!
person Mark's Pet
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG; that last sentence. I did not see that coming!?!?!

I was drawn in so completely; as was Hermoine. I foresee LV having fun 'teaching' Hermoine about all those lovely sexual desires that he will be more than happy to satisfy. But with her freewill in tact, things will be fiery (to say the least).

I love the way this story is progressing. More, please!
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Horcrux.....what?! i love it...please update SOOOON
person Reine
schedule December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally read this, glad I did. Keep it up. :)
person mekom
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a really good story so far. I am amazed that it is your first fanfic. Excellent characterization. I am really interested in finding out what Voldemort has planned for Hermione. Poor Harry. I can't imagine how he is going to get through this without Hermione.
person VestalHarlot
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Good writing, good characterization, pretty good plot. I will enjoy reading more in the future.
person Mark's Pet
schedule November 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a VERY Promising story line.

I always check out LV/HG stories, they have such great potentional for seduction and other naughtyness!!!

I have one comment..."More, Please"!!!!!
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update sooner. i like this story very much and would like to read more!!
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:)
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start for a story. I will leave a longer review once I get more time to go back and reread the first chapter, but for now, I just want to say: Keep up the good work and can't wait to see what you have in store for us. :)