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by tbird1965

schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!Not again!
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I've really enjoyed reading it so far, can't wait for more :)

Angel :)
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh you've really done it now, haven't you? Honestly, you should be ashamed for letting Hermione be so terrible to him. She is, as Minerva said, so very much like Lily that it's almost unforgiveable of her. While I desperately hope that she does manage to save him, I hope she will be spending every waking minute making it up to him. What a heartless selfish woman.
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hermione! Really?! You didn't see that coming after that oh so professional letter?! What the hell were you NOT thinking?! I know his actions were a bit stalkerish and creepy, but look who we're talking about? Jiminy Cricket, woman! I want to wring her neck right now! I have to say that's probably one of the few times when someone has compared her to Lily and I completely agreed! That was an awful thing to do to a already drowning man. Wow, just.... wow. Please save him and then give him to me to heal, okay? Thanks! HG4eva
person rae
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is fab! I loved this chapter(20) it was great. The story is developing really well, keep up the good work!
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Insert deep aggrieved sigh here... I honestly don't know who I feel more sorry for right now. Hermione's feelings are all completely justified, if a bit jumbled; it was her body he used. But, I also ache for Severus, as I understand how he got to that point. Man, this... sucks! I honestly hope she can start to see the "compliment" in his actions, even as creepy as they were. And, I hope he doesn't go off and do something extremely stupid before the see one another again. He's got to stop shooting himself in the foot at some point; he's out of toes. Here's hoping for a sign of hope in the next chapter. Thank you, HG4eva
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
She'd better let him come to his session. What little of his sanity is hanging on that very precarious filament of her...and it'll destroy him otherwise. And she's sick because she can't accept that the most wonderfully brilliant man that she admires so much- not only returns those feelings- but returns them to such an extreme that he felt he had no choice but to have her in the manner that he did. She'll get over the sick, she'll have to. She does fancy him, a good deal more than she's willing to admit to, but surely this has to wrap up well for him. Now- if only I could find your stamina to pump out chapters- I seem to have dug myself into a hole in mine at the moment. Keep updating! You'r giving me willpower and motivation!

~CC
person Tracy Turner
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Come on! The wait is killing me! This is one ofthe best stories I have read In a long time! I'm loving the poly juice twist!!!!! Write and post quickly. I'm waiting for the next chapters!!!!
person colao
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
as much as I dislike angst, this is good
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Stupid Severus.