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by tbird1965

person Pammy sassy p
schedule September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg Please don't leave me hanging this is beautiful.....
person Ephem
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Needless to say I just revisited AFF.net today and stumbled upon this fic! I read all the way to chapter 21, then in utter depression over reading it way too quickly, I went browsing the net. I happened to come back to see if I could find a different story when what did I find???? CHAPTER 22! Thank you soooo much for posting more. But now, I find myself sitting here waiting for more! Keep on writing, I'm loving every minute.
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now, we're getting somewhere!
person Insolence
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Running his head down his face he turned his head."
How PRECISELY did he accomplish that? o_O

Please don't take it where I think you're taking it with the "confession" thing. Please.
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I sort of forgive her for overreacting, since she saved his life and stayed with him. And, I really hope she says how she feels next, so he doesn't feel so horrible about himself for thinking of her as a woman and not the little girl he taught. Maybe this was his turning point/rock bottom? I hope. Oh, and can someone PLEASE hurt Lucius badly?! Making him a horribly disfigured squib would be a start! UGH! Thank you again. :-) HG4eva
person Mary
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pregress... that was an excellent thing to have on an story like yours. Hope for things to get better, more black underwear from Severus and more house cleaning. Maybe she can stay for the hose improvements he was planing to do as part of his recovery therapy... keep him busy, you know?
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
~sigh~ cliff hanger. not fair. But delicious and wonderful. And of course she saved him. Let's just hope *that* doesn't drive him off the deep end. And of course this confession just might as well. Very lovely update. And looking forward to more.
person Mary
schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It has to be better, always worse before it gets better, right? right????
Very intense chapter, love Minerva's scottish dress down on Hermione. Stuborn woman and dumb Severus, someone loves you you dummy...
More soon please?
person snape1sh
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Hermione, what did you do?! :(
I cannot wait for your next chapter!
person rae
schedule August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop there! This is so good and this was a great chapter!