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for Snape's Story

by tbird1965

schedule September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First, wow! Well done, you! ;-) Next, I am glad they're letting themselves find some happiness with each other. I only hope he doesn't backslide too far when the real world intrudes once more. Thank you for giving them some time to relax and learn each other. Great job! HG4eva
person cbot
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this story so much! I generally don't like the formatting of this site so to be honest I don't review much, but I just had to let you know how much I love your work. Keep it coming, I'm on the edge of my seat!!! :)
person Sincerely
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, egad!! Your story is so fucking fantastic!! I love it!! Please finish it!!
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like a vulnerable Snape :)
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well! It's about time! Wonderful update!
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, hello! Wow! We went from hopeful to very happy, didn't we? lol I don't know if this was a mistake or not for their immediate future, but it was a great step forward in their long-term one. I hope the next chapter, they both get to be really happy for a little while. :-) Thank you!! That progressed well for all concerned. ;-) HG4eva
person Mary
schedule September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*Fanning myself* is just me or it turn out to be hot here???
Great chapter, marvelous developments... yummy!
schedule September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
UGH!! I hate when it doesn't take your review!!! The second time is never as good. lol

So, let me try again. That was a rather positive chapter. She admitted her (sorta kinda) feelings, he knows she saved him, he hasn't tried to kill himself or drink himself to death in almost a whole day, and she hasn't left him. All-in-all, I am feeling rather hopeful this time around. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Severus rarely ever blushes!^_^ It's short but I'm glad things are progressing.
person Mary
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You naughty, naughty author