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for Snape's Story

by tbird1965

schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sigh... One fantasy that went a bit too far. I feel awful for both of them. Alright... go fix this! Please. :-) Thanks, HG4eva
person Sasha2010
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was hot! Justnre read the whole thing! I want Severus now! Missed reading your lovely smut tbird !!!!
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter. Bella was an interesting twist. Usually its her sister.
person ChaosLady
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very naughty Hermione!
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like their "normal" moments. They make me smile. Thank you. And, Bellabitch?! Ewwwwww ;-) HG4eva
person delia cerrano
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I guess I like the idea of someone helping Severus who I've always felt so sorry for. He always seems so lonely & unloved...treated unfairly & misunderstood.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Read the story all the way to here in one go! Didn't think I'd care for it as I don't much care for Ms Granger b& really like Snape with Harry but thought I'd give it a try. Surprised me...it was terrific! Very realistic re alcoholics. Hope Hermione gets to show Severus she means it when she says she's possessive. But I don't want to read Snape with any one else just that she might think he was going to or thinking about straying. Any way fine writing.
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ron is lucky he got off so easy. I'm surprised Hermione didn't punch him. But I suppose she was more concerned for Sev. Good chapter, can't wait for more.
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That's a very personal question! Excellent update!
schedule October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, they are going to have to learn a way to get him to talk a bit more, but at least he's trying. And, she needs to take a professional step back and realize how much he's trying and changing and growing. But, they are getting so much closer to having a real healthy relationship. :-) Thank you for this lovely story! HG4eva