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for Snape's Story

by tbird1965

person StarFire
schedule February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus :( and Uh-oh Hermione... I think you did a remarkable job for such a difficult chapter. Bravo! I can't wait to see what happens between them now. Thank you for sharing this with us, and happy writing! <3 Much love.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hermione's joke about Lucius being the Dark Lord's fluffer was the one of the few highlights in the chapter. That and Lucius giving Severus fellatio! This was better than the last chapter, not quite as dark and disturbing for me.
person alientheet
schedule January 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 4... liking your story... but didn't appreciate the line: "Most prostitute's are former Hufflepuffs. They become whores or nurses. They're not intelligent enough to become anything else
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just obliviate him, and Hermione, too, when you're finished with poor Severus. No one should have to live with horrific memories like these. I'm off to read something REALLY fluffy. That poor man... Thanks, hon! HG4eva
person ChaosLady
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so disturbing to me that I skipped half of it. I knew it was a bad idea for Hermione to look at those memories.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Considering that the vial is marked DL, which I think stands for Dark Lord; she might not want to see those memories...
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is not going to go well. Sigh... Thank you for the update and I thank you for giving them a little happiness before he explodes all over them. Happy New Year!! HG4eva
person notlori925
schedule December 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just caught up with this story. I read the whole thing today. It is amazing! The subject is very deep and intense. I like how broken and vulnerable Snape is in this story. I hope he can learn to talk to Hermione so he doesn't push her away for good. Can't wait for more!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes, he is going all avoid-y. Nice update.
person DB1
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
@34. Really love this story. I like how it's showing the real gritty and emotional bad side of addiction great work. Update soon

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