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by tbird1965

person rae
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quickly, the story is great so far keep it up!
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord, what a miserable existence this man has had. It's no wonder he's so troubled and hurting. I wish his parents were still alive (oh, and real lol) so that people could line up to beat them senseless! WHEN he wakes up and is FINE, I hope he can truly start to heal. He deserves some peace and love. Sigh... Thank you again, my dear! HG4eva
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a well deserving chapter. And very intense. And I do hope poor Severus manages to make it out of the coma alright. And that Lucius won't cause too much trouble. You've pegged them all quite well, and I do so love the image of her with shorter hair. This chapter was thoroughly engaging. Thank you. Please give us another soon.

Cheers,

~CC
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello there. I LOVED the quick update, so thank you!! Sometimes Lucius just needs to be the bad guy, and you did a great job writing him as such. He was smarmy and mean. Poor Severus. If that's the kind of "friends" he has, it's no wonder he's such a complete mess. Sigh... And now, when he wakes up from his coma, he's going to get in trouble with the Ministry, too. Sigh again...

Another fantastic update! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I neeeed the next chapter *cries*
person snape1sh
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading Snape's memories and see Hermione's reaction.
The follow up at the ball also excellent and I cannot wait for the next chapter (once again)...Snape in the hospital...at least now Hermione finally knows where he is and hopefully the can have another session.
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That part about his childhood just broke me down. I hope you're satisfied.
person Mary
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful you... thank you. It was another update and I feel so distress and so relief because now Hermione knows 3 important facts. The sad story of Severus
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Severus you dunderhead... are you trying to kill yourself? After he is well enough to leave the hospital he should stay with hermione till he is fully recovered... and then never want to leave. Or maybe she can stay with him and then he'll be too weak to kick her out. Hmmm...yep. He'll be stubborn no matter what you make him do!
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent progression; this scene was well crafted and the insertion of the neighbor whom you'd referenced before enhanced his sad sad life. Poor Hermione, when will she realize she's in love with him? Can't wait for another.