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for Snape's Story

by tbird1965

person Jullsy
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's been long tile since any story has made me such good impression. Please uopdate soon. I like how he calls her Hermione.
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dreadful!! She should have insisted she stay. Or at the very least try to coax from him what he saw while he was struggling...clearly just one kiss...dream or not...at least I'm grateful for the update. And it was a wonderful chapter. very touching.
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad he survived. I can't wait til the next chapter.
person Mrs_HH
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh chapter 15...brilliant. Not more can be said really! Can't wait for more.
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am VERY glad he seems to be okay. His dream was very interesting and telling. I feel badly for Hermione who is confused, scared, chastised, in denial about her feelings, and feeling like a failure. Poor girl. Thank you for another good chapter! HG4eva
person snape1sh
schedule August 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love this story and loved this chapter <3
Hermione's hesitation before she put her hand on top of his...gah!
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awwww...just...awwwww. I'm so glad Hermione was there with Severus when he woke up. It would be nice if he allowed her to be around him more than just their counseling sessions.
person Mary
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
We are making progress and I love the fact that the doctor was so understanding. Thank you for another lovely chapter.
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I can't wait for more!
person Fotia
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story. And so far love this Hermione. Can't see her as the semi-virginal submissive she's usually stuck being. I picture her as going through a phase of out-of-control after the war. Maybe that's why she went into counseling. At least a normal sexual history for someone of her age.