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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Again you have provided an AWESOME and BRILLIANT chapter!!!
schedule July 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, can't wait to read more. I started re-reading Bound and then got distracted lol. I like how it seems the new walkers are joining in, maybe this will give them a greater sense of family and acceptance? I am also curious about that vampire. Maybe he will be useful. Can't wait to read more.
schedule July 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*high pitched squealing and trampling footsteps* I LOVE IT!!!!! GIVE ME MORE! *tackle* You HAVE to show this meeting. SOON! This is going to be so great!!!!! I can't wait for the final showdown!!!!! You have to make Moira's death brutal and bloody! And extremely painful.... It's only fair... I do wish you great luck in finishing your original novel. I can't finish any of my stories to save my life.... :/
person Kimbovet
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the Princess Bride reference! Another great chappie! How about I invite your muse out to eat at the local Chinese buffet? That should keep her fed. ;-)
schedule July 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a roundabout chapter if I ever read one lol. Great job though! Glad your girl likes the books! I swear its a sign of intelligence lol
person Spirit
schedule July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. It's brilliant. When I read Bound and Fooling Fate, I feel like they're an extension of JK Rowling's own works. The story is detailed and well written, it flows like water in a stream or slow moving river. It's slow enough to read with ease but it doesn't drag like some stories I've read. You've managed to keep me interested and intrigued right from the start of Bound which is something only really good authors can accomplish. Well done. I look forward to reading future chapters. Keep up the fantastically, amazingly, brilliant work! :)
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED Bound and when I saw that there was a sequel, I was over the moon! You are a fantastic writer and have caused me more than a few tears (both happy and sad). I've gotten to Chapter 50, and I cannot wait for more! I've also read several of your other stories. Please keep writing!
person Kimbovet
schedule July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter & like Eldin the horrible elf mime! Update when you can. There's no rush.
schedule July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* A new chapter! Thank you thank you thank you! And a "new" creature. Great chapter, loved it. I wonder how tired it would make them to do that to all the tree's there...can't wait to read more!
schedule July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Short, but still worth the wait. I hope we see Elden again. I like him. :) It'd be nice to meet his brother. I hope they find him....