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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

person Sarah
schedule October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR WORK!!! This has got to be one of my absolute favorite stories. You have it all...Dramione, kids, and Greek Mythology! Perfection in reading, or at least I think so. The only criticism I have is that there is one little mistake. Zeus is the baby brother of all the Gods of Olympus, not the oldest. LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHH!!!! Back-talking Triton AND treating him with a heavy dose of discontent.... I LOVE NATE!!!! He's my hero. lol This should prove to be incredibly interesting. :D
person Bogarto
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good to see that the muse released some material for us! The awkward parent/children sex talk was hilarious from both sides. The innuendo with the mind melding had me LOLing hard. I so love it when we learn more about their personalities. You've created so many potential spinoff opportunities with your characters...maybe your muse will direct you to some side stories down the road? :) Thanks for the touch of smut to finish it off as well! Eagerly awaiting the battle chapter(s?).....
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
person Kimbovet
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!! An update! Keep on fighting. We love the story!
person Lucidia89
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling some strong vibes of dejavu... lol So... A meeting with Poseidon, eh...? That should be interesting. I can't wait to see this. :D Maybe we'll finally get a little luck...? Gods know we need some...
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see another chapter out. I have been working myself into the ground with all the homework form college. This is just what I needed. Great chapter too, I love the visual of someone shooting fire from their eyes XD
person LadyFireCrab
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories EVER! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you could tempt your muse by watching some Hercules and Xena? After all, you're dealing with deities now.....
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read a fix with heavy bdsm. There are too many with the tag that have it in maybe 1 or 2 chapters out of 30