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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

schedule July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going so far, can't wait for the next chapter (:
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i cant wait to see more of the new characters! longingly waiting for your next post UPDATE soooooon!!
person Saphirephoenix
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I adore your stories. I chair danced for two minutes when you posted the first chapter of 'Fooling Fate'. I really respect the way that you do not romanticize war or what an agent and soldier will have to do to both achieve their mission and survive.

I cannot wait to see more. Please keep writing.
person Kimbovet
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the humorous banter between the 4 in the beginning. Draco & Hermione going at it in the same room with Harry while he was in the pensieve...Wow! Bring on the surprise.
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter, i didnt expect where you were taking me but i like where i ended up and am very excited to see where youll take us in this journey! update soon!! cant wait for more!
person Anon
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was really looking forward to this second installment, however I was very quickly overwhelmed with nausea. It was wonderfully written, so much so it brought back vivid recollections of my visit to a Nazi concentration camp last year. It was called Sachenhausen, just on the outskirts of Berlin. The chill in the rooms where all the medical experiments happened in the camp was evoked in your chapter.

Looking forward to your next chapter, with some optimistic hope there will be at least a mention of adorable happy children, romance and smut!
person andy schroeder
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading bound for the past few weeks now. I absolutely love it and i need you to update faster! This series has become my new childhood (even though im 21 now). You do amazing work and are very detailed and its everything I ever hoped for! Draco and hermione is my favorite match up, and i LOVE the Ron Luna match up! It's what i was hoping for in the actual books! So keep up the good work, and keep these coming, because I NEED more chapters to go on with life!
person Raven
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseee hurry and update. I read bound and loved it and now reading this im so excited!
person Kimbovet
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looks like they're gearing up to hit the ground running in this one. Looking forward to reading more!
person Ah...Draco
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well this feels familiar ...you have me at your mercy again ...I'm interested to see where this one is going ...here's hoping for some fun stuff between my faves Draco and Hermoine to go along with the dark
Good luck with your internship and keep writing!!