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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is going to have more layers than an onion. But I like it. ;-)
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Made my night that you posted! I love this story to peices and I look forward to each new chapter! Usually I hate reading in progress stories but you update so quickly that it hardly gets to me at all. Fabulous job
person Kimbovet
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great & action-packed chapter as usual. Whorple is such an idiot. I hope she gets what's coming to her, preferably delivered by Melody. Anywho, thanks for the list of children & hopefully for a future list with the children & their respective mates. KUTGW
person DemonicAngel09
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More More Please! you have me right on the edge of my seat, please keep up the fantastic plot :)
person Raye
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love both Fooling Fate and Bound. I waited a while for you to start writing Fooling Fate. Because of that time lapse, could you write out a brief family tree detailing relationship and mates (mainly for all the children- there are so many of them!). THANK YOU! Can't wait to read the next chapter :)
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love love love your stories but I have a favor to ask of you, would you include a list of the children's pairs and their backgrounds in the next chapter? I'm getting a bit lost with all of the names going around. Thanks and your story truly is wonderful, I look forward to ech new chapter
person misty
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not too dark. Just dark enough. I mean they've already defeated Moldy Shorts (good one by the way) so the next threat would necessarily have to be harder. Keep it coming!! I'm so glad I didn't find "Bound" until it was already done 'cause I don't think I would have lived through the anticipation!
person Kimbovet
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Lily getting dragged into this. Now to see who her mate is & what you have n your devious mind to save them. ;-) I don't feel it's too dark; just right IMHO.
person shelagh
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this series. I read Bound in one marathon session. Now I'm hooked on this one. Keep up the great work. Love it!!!
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lily, This is great, I like that it is darker than Bound it fits with everything going on, it is fantastic and I feel like I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next