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It's not too drawn out, but the suspense is building so much, I almost can't handle it! lol I'm glad Zandra's handling it well. You have a VERY well thought out story. I'm jealous. Mine never turn out this great. You are an amazing writer. :)

Every chapter I seem to love this story more and more! That poor poor girl, what happened to her was absolutely terrible! I hope they are going to be able to get the boys out soon along with the others who are in khrone's castle. Looking forward to the next chapter

I don't think it's too drawn out. But one of the things I liked most about "Bound" was the interspersing of humor. I think this one is much darker (as it's supposed to be) but I think the kids would adapt better if there is still some levity between them and their parents. But that's just me. And as I hope you can see from the reviews I've been leaving I'm reading both at the same time!!! I can't imagine the work that you are putting into this and they are both amazing! Keep up the good work!

Poor Zandra & poor Aiden. Hopefully, she'll get her revenge on her past captors soon. The pacing seems fine right now. You're keeping the story moving while filling us in on these new characters background. As long as you don't let the story get bogged down in minutia & you give us the occasional lemon ;-), there shouldn't be any complaints.

Have fun at your last week of your intership! Hope it went well for you. And I cannot wait until you put up the next chapter I always can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work!

Words cannot express.... O.O You have me on the edge of my seat! Every time I read your new chapters I am completely riveted. Don't put the family through too much hell. I'm not sure they could take it. :/

Amazing! As always, you have me on the edge of my seat. :) I can't wait to see them infiltrate the school. What a wonderful coup that's going to turn out to be! :D I'm all excited now! Don't let Aiden go too crazy on everybody. They meant well. At least he won't have to be separated from her anymore. And are the kids going to have to bond with their mates before they finally beat "The Master"...? Because the indication I got from the conversation with Nemesis, they won't have much time before they have to fight.... They're not all going to be of age by then are they...?

OMGoddess. I love the way you've really made the kids into perfect blends of their parents. This is the first thing I check every morning to see if you've got anything new up. Good Luck with the last week of interning!!!

You are amazing. I'm serious. You should be writing for your own profit. I love what you are doing with someone else's characters. I would love to see what you would do with your own.

Oh, thank goodness! I was just going to tell you I was having trouble keeping track of the kids! lol And I would have reviewed the last few chapters, but I've been quite busy with my own writing projects and my unfortunate trips back to reality. Anyway, I absolutely love the turns you're making! This is so dark and gripping I can't NOT read it! It's too perfect to pass up! Do please write more soon. It's so wonderful and you really help me with my writer's block! xD