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I'm finally getting into reading this and holy mother of darkness woman! Still love your writing style though and looking forward *gulp* to reading more.

I'm really looking forward to your next chapter and can't wait until you post it! This was a really good chapter for catching up on what has happened and it definately is going to help keep things at salem straight for me plus the fight was amusing to picture. Thank you for posting again and looking forward to the next!

LOL! Can't wait to see what the kids do to Salem. I'm sure Whorple will have a stroke dealing with them. No worrys, just update as you can.

Love it!! Keep it coming. But I really understand hoe RL can slow down the updates

You updated again! Twice even before I could check again, though I suppose that has to do with being super busy getting back to school again but I haven't reviewed your stories in far too long and I have to let you know that as gruesome as the last chapters have been they have also been very well written and wonderful to read! Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter!

I absolutely loved this chapter! Words cannot express my love for this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! And good luck!

Ooo wee! That was some good tasting lemonade. ;-) Glad the gang is helping Zandra with her self-esteem. KUTGW!

Hey goldhorse, your fanfic is absolutely fantastic :D. I have been a fan of your work since bound, it is absolutely addictive and the waiting period for the next chapter to come out is filled with oh sweet pain loll. Its great work so far and I usually don't leave reviews unless the fanfics are really nice lol :D. So you have managed to impress me with your plot in a very good manner. Just wanted to point out one thing, I read your last 2 or 3 chapters one after the other and I noticed that the amount of explosions that the characters seem to have are just too much. I mean the dark stuff in the last chapter went on for a while from one memory to another, but after a while you would expect the characters to become numb to what's going on around them and just not let themselves be influenced, but Melody blows up at every single instance. I mean I understand that your character Melody is half crazy (or full crazy loll if you prefer) but the amount of explosions that she has is a tad bit unrealistic and honestly after like two of them I personally felt like going into the chapter and slapping some sense into the character haha :p. Its just that repeating the same thing over and over has made me as a reader numb to all the explosions, so even when some stuff that you wrote about is really dark, it doesn't come off as something so bad due to the over-exaggerated reactions (not the first time around but after being repeated a few times lol). I may be the only one out there and ultimately writing this is for your pleasure and I as a freeloader have no right to criticize your work (I am not, sorry if I come across as a critic lol). I hope you dont take offence from my feedback, and as always I am a huge fan of your story and can't wait for the next installment. Also I was wondering If you can perhaps post just a chapter mentioning who is whose kid lol (you can completely ignore this if its too much work loll), because I tend to get lost sometimes because I am not reading the book in one go lol and there A lot of kids to read about lol (seems like these guys have been at it like energizer bunnies loll :p). To end off on my long review, its great work you are doing and I am really excited by it as the author is not ditching us halfway through. Many authors decide to leave off their good stories because they simply can't find the time to finish them (I am one of them, although I didn't really have a good story haha :p), so thank you very much :).

Keep up the good work!,
Ginzo

Perfect! As always, you left me on the edge of my seat! Take your time on the new chapters. :) You deserve the break. :) And I didn't really find the rape scene to be all that hard to read... I guess I just have a really twisted mind. lol I love this story so much.

OMGoddess! Is so good. And also so sad/horrifying. Thank you for the lightening coming up, cause I think that we need it! Good luck and I know you'll do well on your interviews!