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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

person musicandbooks96
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! i was lucky enough that the first fanfic i read was your Harry/Ginny off shoot of Bound. By the time i got there you had finished writing it! i was/am so happy that it was the first one i read! when i saw that you had started this one i was literally jumping up and down in joy. :-D I've been wait on pins and needles for each and every chapter. i get a bad feeling about this next chapter..... please don't let anyone die so soon in the story..... When is Ms. Toad Jr (Whorple) gonna end up in Circe? (i don't know if i spelled that right...) or better, dead?
person SilverStorm
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one. Please update soon :)
person shelagh
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahh the ravening hoard has been appeased with another chapter from our valliant author. LOVED IT!!!! Thank you for updating. Mmuuwwaahh
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say I love this story and I fangirl squeal every time I see an update. I don't review much because I always read from my phone at work but I just had to say I love it. Every Chapter.
All the complexities and subplots work very well together not to mention when I'm reading it doesn't read like a "fanfic" it reads like a novel.
Please keep writing and updating, I'm really looking forward to what happens.
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*pulls you up and puts you right back in bed* None of that now missy! You got the chapter out and that is all that matters. Well, that and you feeling better of course. If anything, we should be at your feet begging you to continue. As for the chapter, amazing as always! I did find it confusing though that we were tossed right from they are getting bonded, to after bonding. That threw me for a loop and I thought I missed a chapter. Also, when Melody was explaining what people were and what they were called, right after Draco and Hermione were mentioned she said "We call." and then it went right into a different paragraph. Can't wait for more or the update on your other story!
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
THAT LAST SENTENCE BETTER NOT BE FORESHADOWING!!!!! 8O I DON'T THINK MY HEART COULD TAKE IT!!!!!

...Okay, now that that's done... The new chapter is amazing!!!!! I'm sorry you got sick.... Please feel better soon. And take your time on the new chapter for Beyond the Pale. As much as we want the new chapters, we don't want you to strain yourself. Okay? :)
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*claps hands in excitement* another wonderful chapter! sorry to hear your under the weather :(. get better soon :)
person Saphirephoenix
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, another chapter. My sympathies: stomach flu isn't fun. I forgive you for a week of waiting for updates and having to run to the solace of my bellydancing drills.

There is nothing like some cut-throat Quidditch to liven up a day at school. I was very happy to see this. Well done, milady!
person Random Reader
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I apologize for not reviewing sooner. I have been reading your stories for over a year starting with Bound and am now realizing that I can review without an aff account.

But I must say, I love your stories. It is so well written that I wish that it was actually published in book form. I would love to just keep a hard copy to read whenever I want. Can't wait to see what happens next and will be stalking the site for updates.
person Kimbovet
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're back & hope you get to feeling better soon. Liked the quidditch tryouts & look forward to Khrone's castle. While I liked this chapter in general & it moved the story along, there seemed to be some things missing & not enough hints to flesh out everything, especially in the beginning. The last chapter left us just before Melody & Alex bonded & this chapter startd right after they bonded. I really hope you give us a one-shot covering the bonding & right after. Then after the hot Hermione/Draco scene in the transfigured tent, you mentioned something about a prank involving screaming that woke Hermione but you didn't really explain what that was all about or even who did it. The end also felt a bit rushed. Please, don't feel you need to rush chapters thru just for us. We will wait, sometimes impatiently, but we won't leave you. You are a great storyteller. P.S.: While waiting for this update, I've been re-reading "Bound" & still thoroughy enjoy that story.