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Well, even though I reviewed the last chapter before it was changed, I shall do so again as I have more to add. I opened a notepad to record what possible mistakes I noticed so I shall just copy and paste. So, to start with:
Chapter 21
Ugh, Hagrid in a bikini *shudders* What a terrifying and yet funny thought lol. That position Draco put Hermione in, is it so that her back is exposed or her stomach? Because I found as a kid I could curl up like that and rest on my neck and shoulders with my knees pressed to the floor, but if its so her stomach is exposed then dang she has a flixible spine o.O

"Everyone started chanting the now familiar until magic" word missing here I think

"Alex smiled.

Duh dun duh is it Lucius?

I can't believe you left at a cliff hanger:(. I really hope they all survive and can go back to their children... I don't want any of them to die in this buliding.
I have come to love all your new characters:)

Oh thank you, thank you for updating this amazing story! I've almost fell victim of reading chpt 21 before I read that note and I had to thank you for the changes you made. <3 it!!

GAH!!!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO US?!?!?! *weeps uncontrollably* It's absolutely fabulous, though. :D And that damned poem is creepy as shit.... The only person I can think of right now is Lucius... but he's dead... isn't he...? The guy's carrying his cane, though.... But, if it's not him... it'd have to be someone who had access to the cane and I can't think of anyone else.... But, Lucius is dead, isn't he...?

Oh you evil, evil person! How can you leave us hanging with that!? Totally loving this story, and your others as well. You've definitely become my favorite fanfiction writer. Please keep up the good work, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

Thanks for adding the scene & additional info in the previous chapter. That helped a lot. So far so good for the group going thru Khrone's castle. Hopefully everyone in the group makes it out alive. As far as to who the Master is, you appear to be leading us to think it is Lucius Malfoy returned from the grave but I've been leaning toward him being MacNeeley in disguise. *Shrugs* Guess we'll see next chapter.

i would say its lucious, but thats too obvious and draco would recognize the voice immediately. can't just say its "the master" that too general. has to be someone at the last battle to get the cane. has to be an old death eater. Nott?

Squeee a new chapter! Thank you!!!

I have started reading the sequel and I already loved it. But I really can't keep up with all the new couple and who should be paired up with. Can anyone give me a list of who will be with who. Thank you:)