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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

person Kimbovet
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad the others got out & surely Phillipe will recover. I have faith that Hermione & Draco will make it out alive but probably tortured & weak. They always seem to find a way to survive & escape. I still think the Master is probably MacNeely but since you haven't really told is the Master's sex, I wouldn't be surprised if Whorple is revealed to be him. KUTGW!
person shelagh
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dang!!!I love this fic. Keep up the great work. Sorry you didn't get your day off. I know how rough that is. We can be patient for a fic this entertaining. Who is the master?? I have no idea and that makes it even more fun.
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know... this would be so much more helpful if you would tell us just who is so close.... lol Anyway... sorry work sucks.... But! Since you like toying with us, I suppose I can play your silly little game.... ;) Nice touch with the half brother. :) I'm impressed and disgusted that I didn't think of something so profoundly simple. lol And I'm gonna fangirl for a little bit, simply because this is my favorite set of OC's within a given universe. YOU CAN'T KILL PHILIPPE!!!!!! COME ON!!!!!! TO THINK OF EVEN KILLING ONE OF THEM SHOULD BE CONSIDERED HERESY!!!!!!! *clears throat awkwardly and shuffles feet* ....So.... Back to thinking.... Cygnus Lucian LeStrange-Malfoy.... First thought: GROSS!!!! Bellatrix having a son with Lucius?! Ick. Not all that surprising, but still ick. Not someone I'd want to fuck with.... Anyway.... Second thought: I was right about it having to be someone with access to the cane, wasn't I...? :) Anyway.... Third though: The Master.... DEFINITELY a former Death Eater- or someone with close ties to one.... Especially if Cygnus was raised by him. But, the fact that we've never seen him before makes me think he was either very well hidden in Europe somewhere, or in America.... So... that leads me to think that it's someone close to Lucius, or MacNeeley.... Thing is... I have to finish re-reading Bound to remember if any of the ones still alive are smart enough to pull this off.... (Yes, I'm re-reading it and I'll review it again when I'm done, because I'm just that sad. lol) But, I do have a feeling that MacNeeley- pathetic as he seems- is cunning enough to have an alternate persona he adopts to keep his plans hidden. Thing is, with Melody's sight, she would've seen all of that lurking beneath the surface, wouldn't she...? So, I guess, in a round-a-bout way, I right back to square one, aren't I...?
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... ever watched a film or a book where you got the end and can't do much but sigh to decompress?? That is how I feel like now. Amazing!!
schedule October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good chapter. Great twist! I can not wait to read more. As for the next guess, I am going to have to say Sanders, the Ancient Runes teacher. After going back through the chapters I made a small list of people to be considered. I thought about Mackneely, but it just doesn't seem likely as he has a squib sister. He just seems like a prick who needs to have a nasty run in with one (or more) of the kids spellwork lol. Anyways, can't wait to read more!
person MB 3
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've several things to say, so I apologize if this gets a wee bit lengthy. First off, I've been stalking your page since halfway through Bound. I love your stories and have read them all. But since my account was deleted here from non-use, I just haven't been much of a reviewer. I couldn't resist participating in your guessing game though. Before I guess, in chapter 4, is Knott supposed to be Nott? Because they all have a "k" first. I just want to make sure that I'm not missing any of my old Death Eaters.

As to my guess, I just can't seem to decide. Lucius would be too easy. I also don't remember any of the other old Death Eaters being still alive and not in Azkaban. I think the rest were taken care of in the raid on the classrooms. A possessed Narcissa would be fun but not very likely as Dimitri is watching over her. As suspect as MacNeely is, I'm actually leaning more towards Sanders. So, if I had to give one guess, I'm gonna have to go with Sanders-the mean teacher you don't want to cross.
person Whitneyism
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how, or why I think so, but I think it's Ron.
person Goldhorse fan
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chappies. I think the new villain is Lucius. That reference in the Healer Bracken chap has to amount to something after all. Keep up the good work. On a grammatical note they crossed a moat which is a body of water around a castle. A mote is a speck like a piece of dust.
person Sami_C
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous as always. I was sad to see the cliffhanger but it will just make the next installment that much better. I believe that somehow Lucius has survived.

The only error I caught is in 21. During the bonding you said Draco and Harmony are on the outside of the circle with Sev and Celeste.
person Anon
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finish this story!! PLEASE!!