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Wow, that was a chaotic and somewhat confusing chapter o.O Great job though. I can't wait to read more!

Another great chapter despite the cliffie but I dread finding out who doesn't make it. :-(

I dont want them to lose anyone :( lol its such a sad thought. cant wait for more

OH COME ON!!!!!!!! D8 You HAD to do it, didn't you? :( Please, don't lose anyone.... Please let someone interfere.... You're gonna have me in tears now.... :( It's still a great chapter. I still love you. You haven't lost me. lol

Oh you are evil with that cliffie! Look forward to the next chapter.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO...what a place to leave it! cliffie or what! trying to think now who doesnt have a mate...James & Albus thats all I can think of at the moment.

Other than that...an amazing chapter cant wait for the next...keep up the good work :) xxx

*hands over more bruise paste* Honestly woman, you are going to deplete my stores! lol Great chapter. I'm afraid to see which children we lose though, that is going to be sad! But I still can't wait to read more.

This story is awesome and addictive! Totally not a piece of crap. I check every couple days for updates. Keep it up! oh, and do I see a pairing of Jonah and Serena coming?

I almost cried reading them, so it's okay. If you're a wuss, so am I. lol I've been waiting for this all week and finally I got to read it! I'm so glad Zandra's getting straightened out. If anyone deserves to be stronger, it's Zandra. She's such a sweet girl. I also hope Serena can adjust Jonah enough that I don't see him as a selfish prick. That's pretty much my only view on him. He's a selfish, obtuse, prick. So, hopefully he'll redeem himself soon. :)

I forget who it was, but a friend once told me something their professor told them, forgive me if I do not word it properly but I think you will get the meaning. When you are writing, if you feel the same thing your characters are supposed to feel, cry when they want to cry, are happy when they are, then what you are writing is/will be an amazing piece of work. The gist of it is, wanting to cry while writing that, just proves how well you are doing. I wrote a similar scene for the opening of a story I did, I almost cried, told me friend about it, and that is what they told me.

Anyways, great chapter! It looks like Jonah and Serena both might be growing up a bit, which is always good, and Zandra is making such great progress. Is she going to get to meet Remus now? I look forward to reading that chapter ^^ How come no one has checked Draco's office before then? Has anyone checked Hermione's? Looking forward to more as always! These stories and chapters really help me get through the boring and stressful days of repetitive chores and caring for my grandmother.