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Great chapter! Glad they were able to get the kids back. Can't wait to find out what their souls color changing means.

Another fab action packed chapter! :) I'm a bit confused though...how did Celeste get there? I thought it was Annabel and Cadence that went with Draco & Hermione..suddenly Celeste was there....I'll need to re-read it...not a hardship...love this story

Keep up the good work

Josie xx

Poor James, Annabel, & Nuahtl. Wonder if the souls changing colors means they are bonded phenoms now? Bring on the revenge! BTW you mentioned Celeste several times when I think you meant Cadence.

What a creative way to keep them around! Brilliant! I can not wait to see what Draco and Hermione do once they are at the castle. Hopefully they will tie that blonde pricks dick in a knot. Like a pretzel! And make him sterile. I'm sure they know a spell for that, and wouldn't it tick him off when he found out?

Yes!!!!! Muse can suck it sometimes, they deserve to stay. :D I do so hope they level the place. There's nothing but evil in that castle.... They better be okay though. Even if you have to tie Muse to a desk and duck tape her mouth shut. I love it though. It helped me wake up this morning. Thank you. :)

I see Mother Nature didn't blow you away. :-). The use of the Phoenix's was brilliant! Thanks for saving them from your Muse.

Damn, you had me in tears for the first quarter of the chapter...then hoping they'd be saved outright...then to being happy that they'd be saved at least in some form...then to anticipation for next week! Too many emotions for one chapter!!

That's probably why I usually enjoy the chapters following the tragic ones the most. I don't like that tragedy had to strike, but there are so many emotions and such great character development in the aftermath. I really have grown to like Rhapsody more and more as the story has progressed. Her pain was heartbreaking to read and you wrote it well. I never felt that we saw too much into Albus' psyche before this. Yet with the flashbacks and few moments from this chapter really made me feel even worse anticipating that he was going to die. Just getting that bit more development for him was all it took. That's another reason I wish this story could just keep going on and on. You have introduced so many characters with great potential that you could write hundreds of chapters developing them. I think your loyal following would keep reading with great anticipation if you did!

I must say that ever since early in Bound when we learned that Dramione could be the most powerful wizard/witch ever, I always wanted them to unleash a bit of hell. My narcissistic side wants them to let their powers be known by all so they can be praised as much as they deserve...even though that obviously goes against your plot, and would eventually lead to a world of difficulty. Still, no one but the bad guys should be at Khrone's, so I'm really hoping that we see some fury and massive power from our favorite couple.

Keep up the great work!

I saw this story the other day but obviously saw it was a sequel, so as expected I went to the first story and decided to read it. The last thing I expected was to be utterly enthralled by the story; I read it in a couple of days and immediately moved to this one. My enjoyment of this great writing hasn't waned in the slightest and I very much look forwards to finishing reading this one.

Not happy at all with what is going on with Albus and James. You have ruined Harry's life. He will never forgive the all seeing twins for this. Parents react with great anger and grief over a loss of a child. It is the most psychologically damaging of all loss. He will blame them for Albus's death, himself, and Ginny for Albus's death. His entire relationship with Hermione will be ruined. They all broke the most sacred trust a parent can place on someone, the trust that their children will be protected. I just don't understand why Harry and his family have been targeted like this (Lily almost died already). Rhap does have Albus's blood on her hands. At least Harry knew what he was doing when he had to face Voldemort. She didn't even give Albus a choice. I really don't get all the crap to save Philippe, and there is nothing for Albus? It seems to me that the twins are just making things better for themselves, and that is abusing their powers to effect their own fate. Not fair. This whole entire thing doesn't make any sense unless Albus gets to come back too.

:( Muse sucks. Maybe we'll get to see what happens to James and Nahuatl...? I hope they're okay.... And as shitty it is to lose them, the chapters were still amazing. :) *hugs because you need it*