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for Fooling Fate *sequel to Bound*

by goldhorse

schedule August 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I've been reading this for WEEKS! School starts next week so I had to finish it. Here is my advice for this story.

1. DO NOT read this at work. It will consume you 

2. If you are foolish enough to read this at work, have tissues and hand sanitizer. You can use the hand sanitizer as an excuse for the tears 

3. Breathe. Just breathe. 

4  DO NOT have the soundtracks for the movies on shuffle. iTunes was a bitch and knew the exact moment to play depressing movies at the right time. Except for that one part when The Knight Bus was playing. That was the wrong music and needed a change. 

Amazing story. I was so attracted to everyone. What a rollercoaster.

schedule August 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

So awesome. I downloaded your story Bound and read it twice then read this sequel. I didn't leave a review for each chapter since I did download to read but I did want to take the time to come back over here and leave a review. I have enjoyed these stories so much. They are so unique and well written, even with some small errors. An awesome plot, love the original characters you created and cried each time someone died, or seemed to die. I am going searching through your other stories now to see what I can find. Loved these and thanks again for writing. 

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM
schedule April 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
One of the BEST stories I EVER read!!!! LOVED part one Bound and part two Fooling Fate. Ive already read both stories at least tsice, all the way thorough. I can read them both over and over!
person fragmentedheart
schedule November 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished rereading this story along with your others - I've read them numerous times - and I still love them. I know you're busy but I can't wait for more. I'm hoping this becomes a trilogy? Please! I'll beta for you. Keep up the great writing :)
schedule July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I personally think that you could do another story in this set because of the way it ended. I love this set very much and when I first read Bound I didnt realize there was a sequel so I was thrilled when I found this. You have amazing writing skills.
person Mandy
schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I font know if you do something different in the formating but if so, please format every chapter like chapter 2. Its sooooo much easier to read on a phone without having to scroll over every line.
person MzPearlz
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
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....-gives you a story's worth of reviews-...

I LOVED. EVERY. WORD. I swear I could not sleep without reading a chapter or two. Now I have to do this homework that ive neglected for a week :D please please keep writing, I love it! Ima go finish everything else you've written now xD
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You know I kinda want to know what happened to Harry's cloak. wasn't Annabelles father lupin I don't remember him dying but in the part where they are talking about who's going to be fighting Alex talks about him as if he is dead. so Idk if that was a typo or I just missed a part but still I'd like to know! :)
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think you are my new favorite author!! My word, I wish you could get paid and we could see these on the silver screen!! I've loved everything you've written!!