I've been reading this for WEEKS! School starts next week so I had to finish it. Here is my advice for this story.
1. DO NOT read this at work. It will consume you
2. If you are foolish enough to read this at work, have tissues and hand sanitizer. You can use the hand sanitizer as an excuse for the tears
3. Breathe. Just breathe.
4 DO NOT have the soundtracks for the movies on shuffle. iTunes was a bitch and knew the exact moment to play depressing movies at the right time. Except for that one part when The Knight Bus was playing. That was the wrong music and needed a change.
Amazing story. I was so attracted to everyone. What a rollercoaster.
So awesome. I downloaded your story Bound and read it twice then read this sequel. I didn't leave a review for each chapter since I did download to read but I did want to take the time to come back over here and leave a review. I have enjoyed these stories so much. They are so unique and well written, even with some small errors. An awesome plot, love the original characters you created and cried each time someone died, or seemed to die. I am going searching through your other stories now to see what I can find. Loved these and thanks again for writing.
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I LOVED. EVERY. WORD. I swear I could not sleep without reading a chapter or two. Now I have to do this homework that ive neglected for a week :D please please keep writing, I love it! Ima go finish everything else you've written now xD