rate_review Reviews

Holy effing shit. I want to swear really bad, really I do. I know it's just gratuitous but dammit, you really do write it so well. I cannot believe how hot that was. I actually do ship Neville/Luna. Hell I ship just about everyone het. jesus. I'm still all aflutter. But. Besides my giddiness. This worked very well. I could feel Neville's new confidence that year. And you captured that perfectly. I always love luna fics. The challenge is making them work because she is hard to characterize realistically. You did a great job with that. Thank you!

I'd like to see you continue this I know it was only ment to be a one shot but its good!

oK! This is not a couple I typically read because I can't really picture Luna with... well... anyone. But the idea of being watched is sexy fantasy stuff and you definitely delivered on that! Really well done with how you continuously added a little bit more to the scene... Luna noticed Neville, he woke up, she did the spells, he noticed the spells lol, he became more obvious even though he pretended he didn't know she was watching...

You kept taking it up a notch and it flowed really naturally. Very nicely done and sexy as all get out :)