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August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So sweet and so sexy at once. Thank you.
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April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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April 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not bad! Personally, I find the whole "she's in love with him and wants him to 'make love' to her" odd, but that's because personally, I can't fathom it. It just seems too unlikely. Just my personal opinion, and of course, it's ff, and you can do anything you want! Yay for ff! I feel it would have been more believable had the word love never been mentioned. Snape's right. She's infatuated with him, not in love with him. Even in an AU, you can't be in love with someone you don't know. Knowledge is a prereq for love, if you will. That said, this is well-written and I am enjoying it. (You might want to remove the html coding; the coding is visible.)
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am apologizing ahead of time for reviewing on my phone and I have fat fingers lol...
I am shocked no one has reviewed this yet cause it was really well written. I do think that hermione claiming to love severus is a little juvenile but she is 18 so it works. Lol
All in all it was super hot and I cant wait to read more of your stories when I get home and on a computer, instead of my phone... I.saw this one's summary and couldn't wait lol
I am shocked no one has reviewed this yet cause it was really well written. I do think that hermione claiming to love severus is a little juvenile but she is 18 so it works. Lol
All in all it was super hot and I cant wait to read more of your stories when I get home and on a computer, instead of my phone... I.saw this one's summary and couldn't wait lol