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for Mirrored Desires

by kstargal

schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought you were going to dwell around the compound for much longer, but no! Can't wait to find out what will happen next. Somehow, it seems like they're not out of the woods (pun intended^^) and I don't think the mirrors have become entirely useless either, despite their mystery being revealed.
Kudos for the frequent updating :)
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
amazingly hot sexy and thrilling action from our favourite operatives! looming forward to seeing them back at home again. :-)
person SarahWhitman
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! I can't even immagine how Hermione's going to get out of this one! And ohhh Draco. Gotta love a snarky, sexy, knight in shining armor! ;)
person blindfaithoperadiva
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Again, what an adventure plot! Can't wait to read more from you.
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Dun dun dun, things just got (even) more confusing... It's weird to see Draco playing with muggle technology, using GPS and whatnot :p
Glad Hermione for now still has the advantage of having figured the thing with the dreams out, while her partner hasn't.
And where are they really, Tomic isn't a Russian name, Ivan belongs to a lot of countries, though it all doesn't have to mean anything.. I'm certainly eager to learn more in the next chapter :)
person gl101
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I've read a well-written fan fic and I just had to review yours. The way you describe things and make transitions throughout the story is almost impeccable. Your writing is fantastic. Can't wait for the next chapters! :)
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not much of an AU fan, and the two characters here could as well be Thomas and Tiffany for real, but I had no desire to stop reading. You're good at this action thing, the descriptions are neither too scarce nor too many, the reader doesn't get lost or bored. Your Draco cracks me up, with his herculean efforts to keep his persona clean and pristine XD Those tricky mirrors make for a cunning plot, you can basically throw in smut whenever you feel like it, while keeping us captive of the still existing UST. Because, you know, none of it was real ^^ Speaking of which, I wonder whether the COT really has anything to do with this, or is the blue liquid in the vial only such stuff as dreams are made on...
Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
person shelagh
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great idea for a story line! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Lizz
schedule June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Amazing.