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June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
I really enjoyed this chapter, as a matter of fact, maybe it's
my perspective, but I love the relationship you've established between
Harry & Draco. It's professional between them when it needs to be & there's
no overly sweet moments...constantly..at inappropriate times.
As an author I'm glad to see that you maintain the fact they ARE grown men who
can still act like adults behind closed doors and not flip flop their attitudes to
act like 'overgrown teenagers'. Granted I DO like tender moments like any other romantic
out there, I just hate to see it overdone, especially when the story wasn't 'Fluff' to
begin with, especially in a story as serious as this one.
I, also, like the consistency of the aristocratic aura that Draco wears around himself no matter
what setting you have him, whether he's at the office or with Harry, it's says that he is
still a 'Malfoy', BUT he has grown comfortable in his skin and has learned to loosen up a bit.
As for Harry, the way you've written him so far, I love the man he has become, regardless of the
'Lionel' situation, he's a man who has gone from a moody teenager uncertain of his future to a man
who can focus on what lies ahead with unwavering intensity. There's a title for the next story hidden
in there somewhere. I'm just not sure what it is. :-/
Anyway keep up the good job you're doing with this series that has become one I've enjoyed above the
rest.
I really enjoyed this chapter, as a matter of fact, maybe it's
my perspective, but I love the relationship you've established between
Harry & Draco. It's professional between them when it needs to be & there's
no overly sweet moments...constantly..at inappropriate times.
As an author I'm glad to see that you maintain the fact they ARE grown men who
can still act like adults behind closed doors and not flip flop their attitudes to
act like 'overgrown teenagers'. Granted I DO like tender moments like any other romantic
out there, I just hate to see it overdone, especially when the story wasn't 'Fluff' to
begin with, especially in a story as serious as this one.
I, also, like the consistency of the aristocratic aura that Draco wears around himself no matter
what setting you have him, whether he's at the office or with Harry, it's says that he is
still a 'Malfoy', BUT he has grown comfortable in his skin and has learned to loosen up a bit.
As for Harry, the way you've written him so far, I love the man he has become, regardless of the
'Lionel' situation, he's a man who has gone from a moody teenager uncertain of his future to a man
who can focus on what lies ahead with unwavering intensity. There's a title for the next story hidden
in there somewhere. I'm just not sure what it is. :-/
Anyway keep up the good job you're doing with this series that has become one I've enjoyed above the
rest.
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June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you know, it's been a while since Har had one of his intuitive flashes. I'd almost forgotten about them. Yay resurrected plot device. ^^
I wonder what Gin is hiding and what if anything dear micky is up to.
I wonder what Gin is hiding and what if anything dear micky is up to.
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June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
okay... that's creepy. wow, Mio's nightmare come to life. Killer books.
heh, good luck getting Gin to speak with draco about.
heh, good luck getting Gin to speak with draco about.
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June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow when you said that this story is gonna be gory you meant GORY. I don't know how I'm gonna read this but I do know one thing. No eating an hour before I read a chapter. I do wonder though why Harry calls Morningstar Nancy instead of Jourdemayne. I mean I get why he doesn't call her Morning star like Draco does but still. Is it because he was more associated with her twisted side because of the whole wiping the mind thing and thought of her as more of the victim in this than Jourdemayne was? Also wow can't believe you put in a canon character who might possibly be a victim. And can't wait to see how you portray Ginny in this series.
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June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
:-)
Oooh, is Draco going to be messy & antagonize Ginny...just for fun???
If he isn't, why tha' hell not? *devilish grin* When was the last time
the Slytherin in him had a chance to come out to play?
By the way, the thought just hit me, but this series definitely feels like
a continuation of the 'Running to Paradise[?]' trilogy. This is definitely
how Harry & Draco could have ended up if you could have looked in the future
and saw yourself writing this story.
Speaking of series, just how long did you intend to make this sucker? O_o
:-)
Oooh, is Draco going to be messy & antagonize Ginny...just for fun???
If he isn't, why tha' hell not? *devilish grin* When was the last time
the Slytherin in him had a chance to come out to play?
By the way, the thought just hit me, but this series definitely feels like
a continuation of the 'Running to Paradise[?]' trilogy. This is definitely
how Harry & Draco could have ended up if you could have looked in the future
and saw yourself writing this story.
Speaking of series, just how long did you intend to make this sucker? O_o
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June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amen, to that last line Draco!
You know, Harry reminds me a tad of Martin Lawrence from
the movie Bad Boys, when he & Will Smith had to go into
the mansion with the dead body. Squeamish much? :-)
But, I take it they are about to get way over their heads
with this one?
Also, I'm surprised no one has asked this..but WHEN are we going
to encounter face-to-face the 'real blue eyed' twisted???
You know, Harry reminds me a tad of Martin Lawrence from
the movie Bad Boys, when he & Will Smith had to go into
the mansion with the dead body. Squeamish much? :-)
But, I take it they are about to get way over their heads
with this one?
Also, I'm surprised no one has asked this..but WHEN are we going
to encounter face-to-face the 'real blue eyed' twisted???
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June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, ICK. Where do you come UP with this stuff! You're on a roll though. Is there any time when you don't have several stories and assorted one shots flowing smoothly like this... How are you not a full time author again?