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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You know... the way this twisted acts kind of reminds me a bit of Dumbles, more sinister and puppet mastery though. Who would have thought his experiences with voldi and the war would have been useful for something. :P I wonder where blue eyes went though, now that he's lost his previous host and har. I'm betting that necromancer Auror.
Patronus in a mental battle. I haven't thought of tat but i can see why it would work.
Ooooooh, Malfoy taunting... always fun. ^^ especially when the Malfoys sr are being so very dickly.
Patronus in a mental battle. I haven't thought of tat but i can see why it would work.
Ooooooh, Malfoy taunting... always fun. ^^ especially when the Malfoys sr are being so very dickly.
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August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about # 8...
Just wanted to say you have yourself a real good
mystery here...and I liked the emotions put together
in this chapter, with the combo of Harry & Draco's
dedication to the job and devotion to each other.
Just wanted to say you have yourself a real good
mystery here...and I liked the emotions put together
in this chapter, with the combo of Harry & Draco's
dedication to the job and devotion to each other.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
About #7...Ooo! Intrigue! Intrigue y'all !! Now we're getting deeper into something right? I have toask at this point...have u given clues to who Ole Blue Eyes might be? because I'm leaning towards someone in the Ministry.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh... dear. This can only bode bad things. What the hells bells is blue eyes up to and why does he care if they catch/kill other twisted.
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #6[?]...
*laughing* Smoke...and Mirrors??? I thought you were
going to give us something completely unthought of, but
then again who would have thought you'd come up with that one.
:-)
Is just me or does Draco sneers at a lot of things, you know that
sneer of his should be patented...
Also, love the bedroom scene, though I must admit that this time around
not actually reading their time in the bedroom in past chapters gave plenty to
imagine, instead of you having to supply scenarios with the scene. It also gives
an 'air of romance' in a way when you have to imagine it yourself.
*laughing* Smoke...and Mirrors??? I thought you were
going to give us something completely unthought of, but
then again who would have thought you'd come up with that one.
:-)
Is just me or does Draco sneers at a lot of things, you know that
sneer of his should be patented...
Also, love the bedroom scene, though I must admit that this time around
not actually reading their time in the bedroom in past chapters gave plenty to
imagine, instead of you having to supply scenarios with the scene. It also gives
an 'air of romance' in a way when you have to imagine it yourself.
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July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay, forceful smut. ^^ hmmmm, bout time Skeeta was put to good use. :P
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #5...
1. No, I don't mind if you use it for that purpose, kinda figured that would
have been the case anyway.
2. I'm thinking the same as Draco, I think it was an inside job.
3. Damn, that was an intense little conversation. Harry was almost like a
cobra waiting to strike...and still did in a different way at the end, didn't
he? :-) Though the words 'You. Couch' would have made me cackle if the conversation
had taken a turn.
All in all, I really do like this part in the series, makes me wonder how you'll
be able to top this one. Oh, the pressure! O___O
1. No, I don't mind if you use it for that purpose, kinda figured that would
have been the case anyway.
2. I'm thinking the same as Draco, I think it was an inside job.
3. Damn, that was an intense little conversation. Harry was almost like a
cobra waiting to strike...and still did in a different way at the end, didn't
he? :-) Though the words 'You. Couch' would have made me cackle if the conversation
had taken a turn.
All in all, I really do like this part in the series, makes me wonder how you'll
be able to top this one. Oh, the pressure! O___O
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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well now this got a bit more interesting. I wonder how you're going to do the necromancy scene because I rarely ever see it in HP fics and usually when I do it's not very well done. Can't wait to see how you do it. Also Harry should know better than to talk to one of Draco's parents alone. Cause that is just asking for trouble. I mean Draco is the only person I know about who can see through their tricks and manipulations and that was an obvious ploy to get Harry to doubt Draco and cause trouble for them. But then Harry never was one to see through the type of manipulation Draco grew up with. He could probably see it happening when it's directed at someone else but that doesn't mean he could see it and stop it from controlling him when it is directed at himself. He seems to be entirely vulnerable and dismissive when it come to matters of himself.
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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #4..
1. I think only in your mind's eye, you see him as 'angsty'. I
think he is well balanced..and stubborn when he needs to be. :-)
2. You know, the only people who are 'flawed' are the people who
run the Ministry...and see anything that isn't ''normal'' as
twisted, kinda hypocritical when wizards say that.
3. ...and oooh that meddling...WITCH! Causing problems when there
shouldn't be any.
Uhmm, by the way, would it be possible to put a request in for one
of the characters to be named Stephanie? I mean, I'm just asking... if
you don't do stuff like that I understand.
1. I think only in your mind's eye, you see him as 'angsty'. I
think he is well balanced..and stubborn when he needs to be. :-)
2. You know, the only people who are 'flawed' are the people who
run the Ministry...and see anything that isn't ''normal'' as
twisted, kinda hypocritical when wizards say that.
3. ...and oooh that meddling...WITCH! Causing problems when there
shouldn't be any.
Uhmm, by the way, would it be possible to put a request in for one
of the characters to be named Stephanie? I mean, I'm just asking... if
you don't do stuff like that I understand.
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
erggg. the malfoy's sr really need to BACK OFF. Draco is going to have to deal with them before they become a serious problem.