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September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that's sweet in a mildly twisted way. They might not be a normal couple but they make the abnormality work for them.
well, ick, still if i had the choice of having my rather ordinary story known or continuing to live i know which one i'd go with. >>
Oh, well, that bodes bad things. what ever has happened to Macgeorge can't be good.
just charming. it's bloody typical. Still, i'm not sure if it's wise to mess with draco or har. they're a potent combination. Still, they hurt that dude. so he'll be holed up for a while, healing up. Now that they know what he strikes at, maybe the ordinary can do something about that.
well, ick, still if i had the choice of having my rather ordinary story known or continuing to live i know which one i'd go with. >>
Oh, well, that bodes bad things. what ever has happened to Macgeorge can't be good.
just charming. it's bloody typical. Still, i'm not sure if it's wise to mess with draco or har. they're a potent combination. Still, they hurt that dude. so he'll be holed up for a while, healing up. Now that they know what he strikes at, maybe the ordinary can do something about that.
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Squuueeeeee, what an ending. Wonder what Draco will do.
Good writing as usual. Love this chapter, pity that our Smoke and Mirrors got away though hehe.
Good writing as usual. Love this chapter, pity that our Smoke and Mirrors got away though hehe.
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September 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #13..
1. And the problem with chasing Blue Eyes is that he can leap
from body to body
-damn, he's a freakin' parasite! Hmm..OH! That's it! I just had an
idea! Something Harry would do, it's drastic, it's suicidal...hell
it would fit in the story. What if Harry lured Ole Blue Eyes into his
body, but inside of HArry, he took some type of potion combined with a spell
that was lethal enough to act like a poison, sooo...the effect would be a
dying body, but Blue Eyes can't leap out & his essence just dies out.
Just an idea that popped up. :-)
2. You know that fight would definitely would have been worth seeing on TV. :-)
3. Harry rolled his eyes.
1. And the problem with chasing Blue Eyes is that he can leap
from body to body
-damn, he's a freakin' parasite! Hmm..OH! That's it! I just had an
idea! Something Harry would do, it's drastic, it's suicidal...hell
it would fit in the story. What if Harry lured Ole Blue Eyes into his
body, but inside of HArry, he took some type of potion combined with a spell
that was lethal enough to act like a poison, sooo...the effect would be a
dying body, but Blue Eyes can't leap out & his essence just dies out.
Just an idea that popped up. :-)
2. You know that fight would definitely would have been worth seeing on TV. :-)
3. Harry rolled his eyes.
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September 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha no worries, I liked the entire series, and most everything you write lol.
Love this chapter, the parallels and differences in the guy's other auror partners were a nice touch, and Harry having almost telepathy with Draco while fighting is awesome.
Can't wait to see what will happen to McGeorge, poor woman. Maybe she's turned herself into a zombie :D
thanks for the chapter ^_^
Love this chapter, the parallels and differences in the guy's other auror partners were a nice touch, and Harry having almost telepathy with Draco while fighting is awesome.
Can't wait to see what will happen to McGeorge, poor woman. Maybe she's turned herself into a zombie :D
thanks for the chapter ^_^
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
You know, you had me fooled it seemed like a typical stakeout, with the
feel of two men just basically 'camping out' under the stars, when THAT
happens towards the end!
...and THEN you have the nerve to end it where you did! I really hope you're
happy with yourself! *hmph*
...and I can't wait for them to catch that damned blue eyes and just forget
protocol & beat the snot out of him. As a matter of fact, at this point as a reader
I have to say when they 'unexpectedly' come across Ole Blue Eyes in the future, I think
a long chase is in order...first before the beatdown.
Whatcha' think?
You know, you had me fooled it seemed like a typical stakeout, with the
feel of two men just basically 'camping out' under the stars, when THAT
happens towards the end!
...and THEN you have the nerve to end it where you did! I really hope you're
happy with yourself! *hmph*
...and I can't wait for them to catch that damned blue eyes and just forget
protocol & beat the snot out of him. As a matter of fact, at this point as a reader
I have to say when they 'unexpectedly' come across Ole Blue Eyes in the future, I think
a long chase is in order...first before the beatdown.
Whatcha' think?
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't have much to say chapter for chapter about this one, but I am loving it as one of your top stories so far, though I am looking forward to loving everything you write (I dont read everything cos some doesnt interest me) but youre awesome.
Loving this series (Think I read from start to here in less than a week around my job) hehe. Just wanna say thanks for the entertainment.
Loving this series (Think I read from start to here in less than a week around my job) hehe. Just wanna say thanks for the entertainment.
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking that auror feels more for her partner than she's willing to let on.
I hope Mcgeorge isn't snagged by blue eyes, though she likely is.
Well, that's an interesting plan. they don't often try and bait their twisted prey. also, ill be interested to see how Ginny's flowers tie in, if they do.
I hope Mcgeorge isn't snagged by blue eyes, though she likely is.
Well, that's an interesting plan. they don't often try and bait their twisted prey. also, ill be interested to see how Ginny's flowers tie in, if they do.
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, maybe har should turn malfoy baiting into an art. He does it so well, but then the Malfoys sr are sooooo very baitable.
I'm guessing the mirror was linked to 'cissa's necklace? man, they have paranoia down to art huh. So, who gets the manor and all the fripperies now that draco has been booted?
I'm guessing the mirror was linked to 'cissa's necklace? man, they have paranoia down to art huh. So, who gets the manor and all the fripperies now that draco has been booted?
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August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #9..
Now that was a creative scene with the Malfoys, who I'm sure want to
knock Harry back to infancy stage with that little stunt! :-)
You know, I was thinking how ironic it would be if Ole Blue Eyes identity
is obvious. By the way, did Draco hear what was said outside?
Now that was a creative scene with the Malfoys, who I'm sure want to
knock Harry back to infancy stage with that little stunt! :-)
You know, I was thinking how ironic it would be if Ole Blue Eyes identity
is obvious. By the way, did Draco hear what was said outside?