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well damn, that didn't go well. will blue eyes be able to keep the bod with his dead? and, they've just made the bastard stronger. bugger it!

Well I went on holiday and you finished the story. Nice one, I like that non-ending too. Wondered when McGeorge would come back. :)

Will look forward to the oneshot as well. Thanks for the story.

about the end...

Well, that sucks for Harry & Draco...it's back to the drawing
board and NOW they have a bigger problem!

But, I liked this ending, it's finished...yet it is not, the
fight still goes on.

Can't wait for the next episode!!! :-D

awww, hells. So was head auror guy the original blue eyes or was he also co opted?
well, damn, that's going to make things difficult but at least they know what/who they're fighting now.
kinda reminds me of har's experiences at hogwarts all over again but under an authority figure who is far less interested in building the subjects strength, than he is getting the subject killed before he can get strong. ... if that makes sense.

about #19..

*looks at author with stars in her eyes* You brought it to
the table and dished it out! *hugs author*

This is what I'm talking about! You came with it and surprised
everyone, but me. *big cheesy grin* :-] Hell, I knew it had to be
someone in the Ministry, because shit wasn't sitting right and the
arrows were starting to point to him, the more I sat & thought about
it.

Seriously though...but I thought of it more as an association.

ANYway, you do suspense, drama & shock value well AND as I said, you
bring out strong emotions in a whole scene, which I feel benefits stories like
these. Keeps you on edge...

Keep up the good work, I think you did splendidly bringing things to a climax
here and to think you were stressing to make it work. :-)

#18 con't..

oh, I forgot, nice touch with the piglets. ;-)

well, you can't say har doesn't have balls and he needs cast iron ones the size of coconuts to swing this. But then in this series for the most part he's been more guts than brains until he connected with draco enough for draco to apply much needed bitch slaps as needed.
i wonder if blueyes as some thing to do with the SB's (stands for sons of bitches as well as shadow born).^^ He's certainly got a serious hard on for getting rid of har.
with all those aurors scattered to the four winds, even if the SB's can chase them all down, it'll take a while. nice distraction. Now all har has to do is fight blue eyes off... again. :P

Ha poor Draco. He's gonna have to decide quickly. But hopefully Harry will throw off the Blue eyed twisted. I'm sure it'll be fine.

I like this chapter, and I like how Harry notices the love in Draco's eyes. :D

Thanks for writing!

Of COURSE you gave us sex [man, that sounds wrong O_o], but I'm talking
about the complicated art of seduction. Step it up a notch child! Challenge
yourself! Et cetera...et cetera..

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about #18...

*looks at author* You know you should consider doing
screenwriting of action films, because the way you write
fight scenes now, I would definitely like to see them onscreen.

Okay, I'm REALLY starting to believe that Ole Blue Eyes is connected to
the Ministry somehow...because that ain't a random attack. They would have
to be there.

...and we aren't mentioning how you just love leaving s*** at the end.

Whooo hoo what a place to leave it.

Well done. :)