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schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
finally they at least see each other! more soon please!!!???
person delia cerrano
schedule January 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I come in & catch up when chapter 4 was up otherwise I would have been so worried about Mark romancing Draco. Chapter 4 is my favorite so far because maybe, just maybe, Harry stayed behind and will FINALLY get together with Draco (or dragon at his Uncle's) and ace Mark out of even thinking about it.!
person alexkdp
schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i like it. but its so short :( please write more? cant wait to read harry interacting with draco! :D
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*fingers crossed* they are going to meet up with Harry at the fair right?? :)
schedule June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo wonderful!!! Will Draco "visit".
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
neighbors for the summer... def. some clashes ahead lol
person imsandir
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds very interesting so far, a take I haven't read before, looking forward to reading more!!!
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start! I like the way your storyline flows. I liked that Snape helped Draco to be able to pass his loyalty test too. Shows how Snape was protective which I always like and shows that Draco is not the type to be able to easily torture someone.

Oh... your 'Dark' lord was spelled wrong a few times though. One of those things we tend to not notice that happens when we type too fast so I thought I'd give you a heads up :)
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i look forward to learning the back story... still, watch out for typos. eg destress should be distress and so on.