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for Old Inheritance

by Darkmoonfairy16

person Anon
schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story thanks
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is too cute! I love it! Please update soon.
person xxRezxx
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hey your story is amazing please please updated again soon.
person Rihou101
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great Story so far. Keep up the great work!
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There aren't many HarryFenrir stories out there. Even fewer that are good. This story is great
so far. Please keep going!
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the story has potential but please watch the spacing and grammar. New speakers are given a fresh line no matter how little they might say... btw, unless you're talking about a completely different potion it's Wolves BANE potion.

Can't say i blame har for leaving. When your 'new life' is as bound and restricted as your old, I'd be leaving as well.
Why the heck did those two poison the cub? I mean seriously, what's that supposed to prove?
schedule June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love it
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why in hells bells did they have grayback just in a bedroom? that's pretty much ASKING him to take har.