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November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story is going and look forward to updates, but there are quite a few vocabulary mistakes and grammar problems. If you proofread those out it would be a fantastic story!!!
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter one
'They might be several years older than their mate and they would also have to linger in wait for their chosen to mature and grow into the young woman she would become. But, in the end the waiting and watching would be worth it all. For her pureness and goodness, her love for them both, to accept them as they were, and to submit to their will would begin to ease the darkness that resided in their souls. She would be their freedom, their light, and their healing.'
Aw, that is such a sweet first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:)
'They might be several years older than their mate and they would also have to linger in wait for their chosen to mature and grow into the young woman she would become. But, in the end the waiting and watching would be worth it all. For her pureness and goodness, her love for them both, to accept them as they were, and to submit to their will would begin to ease the darkness that resided in their souls. She would be their freedom, their light, and their healing.'
Aw, that is such a sweet first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:)
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter two
Great chapter. I like the narration of the highlights of Hermione's first year, and the brief glimpse into Severus and Remus' passionate side for each other.
Well done - keep up the good work.
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Great chapter. I like the narration of the highlights of Hermione's first year, and the brief glimpse into Severus and Remus' passionate side for each other.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:)
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter four
YUMMY massage time between Remus and Severus.
;~D
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'Hermione was beginning to realize how much of an idiot Professor Lockhart truly was. She rolled her eyes and dismissed what he was saying.'
I enjoyed how Hermione was able to detect just how full of
YUMMY massage time between Remus and Severus.
;~D
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'Hermione was beginning to realize how much of an idiot Professor Lockhart truly was. She rolled her eyes and dismissed what he was saying.'
I enjoyed how Hermione was able to detect just how full of
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter six
Aw, Nee is so sweet! I love it - great addition to the family.
=D
Great story and chapter - well done - keep up the good work.
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Aw, Nee is so sweet! I love it - great addition to the family.
=D
Great story and chapter - well done - keep up the good work.
:)
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter seven
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed this story so far. I haven't read anything similar, and this plot is very interesting. I hope you have a chance to update it soon.
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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an evil, evil cliffhanger! Update soon!
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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow another great chapter! thanks for all the speedy updates! I can't wait for the next chapter cause year three is one of my favorites... I can't wait to see how the whole shreiking shack incident plays out now that Remus and Severus are lovers. I can't wait to see Black's reaction! :3
Thanks again for sharing your story!
Thanks again for sharing your story!
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June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering: At what point will you stop rehashing the books and start the actual story? When will Lupin and Snape become Hermione's guardians? It really is a shame that this story's advancing so slowly, I'm reading Slave of the Phoenix as well, and that's brilliant. But GiL is seven chapters in and I feel like I'm still waiting for it to start.