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for The Dark Lord and the orphan

by Meinouda

person Dhalim
schedule August 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I look forward to seeing where this goes. It's a shame you removed this from FF.net

schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Hmm, I think that this story will be interesting!

I liked the part "If he asked you to dance naked.."! I kept imagining Harry doing that while Voldemort watches! *snickers* Although, everytime I imagine it, Harry has a slightly big ass. *grins*
schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Wonder how the Dark Lord would take that Harry is a squib and not a muggle like he thinks he is!! *snickers* I hope Harry doesn't get killed for hiding that fact!!
person Jan
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far I find this story to be intriguing, I can't wait to read more ^_^ Please update chapter 10 soon.

schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
indeed. they need to learn what the other requires. still there were a few typos. Just little ones like using the wrong tense on a word. anyway, it's still coming along nicely.
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and now the true relationship begins. I hope you do it justice.
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

Thank you for your cooperation.
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting. I wonder if har is indeed a squib or somehow just blocked?
nice to see malfoy is as much of a twat as usual.
schedule June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far. I'm so excited to see what happens next. Please update soon. :)

xoxo,
kitkat
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I fail. I didn't know the quote... it did amuse me though. >>
Nothing more frustrating that everyone knowing a secret about you than you. Maybe har will get some answers... then again, knowing V, maybe not. :P