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I loved this story! It was funny, sweet, and hot!! Thanks so much for sharing it!

Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! Thank you!

I so loved your story, and I was honestly sad when I couldn't find it on fanfiction.net anymore. It is very catching. :-)I never left a review there though, so I owed you this one. I very much enjoyed it. Thank you. :-)

Don't remember if I ever reviewed this and too lazy to check, so reviewing again if I have already and just a new review for you if I haven't. This little one-off really strikes me somehow, I love how well and playfully you put it together. It has just the right amount of caution with implied build up that they were hot for each other, so it was not too implausible for them to be together so quickly. Also, Lucius, the smooth bastard, was prepared, of course. The sex scene was again, playful and very hot. I loved that she came on him before he was able to make her finish a second time, a true gentlemen, and a sincerely touching, short epilogue that tells us where it went while being tasteful. I've come back to read this a few times. Love it each time!

Well, THAT's how it's done...
A well-placed, unexpected reference (that makes sense, mind you) had me checking out your other stories here.

Well done. Well done, indeed.

Have I said before, you're a magician! The scene of the pool, and I become .... Ummm, delicious.

I'm glad to see that the fix was made. Like I mentioned before, great story. I wish more of your readers would review this, thus supporting your efforts more. Many of the writers here seem to be having the same difficulties in that matter. Thanks again for sharing.

I love this couple, and l love the way you brought them together. Wish there was more.

Interesting story. Want to let you know though that the story is printed up twice in this one-shot. You might want to fix that. Other than that one faux pas it was a great story. Thanks for sharing and I hope to read more of your writing soon.

I love the reference to Isaac Asimov's I, Robot. Great job on the story! I loved how he called Hermione chicken and questioned her bravery! very well done!