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eeeeeuwwwwwwww lyke nubuddy evn lieks Snepe y u make him Hrminnie's lurv intrest?

This was good! Looking forward to the next chapter

This is a lovely little story and I do hope you continue it. I'm not really sure about how updates work around here, and thus have no basis to register your story on. But I think, regardless of how sporadically or faithfully you keep this story up, it is worth it. Truly. It is clever. The alternate universe still holds to some of Rowling's basic laws. She is intelligent. She is still attached to Harry, and thus still Hermione. Her diligence in navigating her world is well-thought. The plot for immortality is a unique plot, even if time travel is not, and it very neatly removes some of the restrictions of that twist. You can carry Lord Voldemort's whole life through. She will not wither or age, and there is no need to return to present age. I look forward to seeing your world progress. As for your writing, sometimes your descriptions are overlong, adjectives occasionally misplaced, but I always find it... sensory. The descriptions of magic invoke perfumes, smells, vapors... and sensuality. You write well, as many do. It's no dramatic leap. But still, I think there's a charm, a subtlety. You can taste your sets.

yay...can't wait to see more of Tom's interactions with Snape and Hermione

super awesome story. I love the plot. Never read first draft, so it's all new to me. Hope Tom shows up soon! :)

what happened? last I had checked Remember November was quite a few more chapters along than this, i was looking forward to a new chapter