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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So in one of the storys i read, the author put some information he received, which was apparently what was going on with the crack down. Here is what he had:
Here's some info I got from a reviewer named Rei concerning those responsible. The source of the purge has been found. A group of regular FF users, Critics United, will post any story they don't like on their forum. Then they have all their members mass report it until the story is deleted. In their forum they say they hope to cause another purge soon. They are not critics; they are bullies. They do not offer constructive criticism; they flame and poke fun. They like to call stories shit-fics, and call authors whose story they got deleted 'immature' and 'likely to bitch at them.' They often use heavy sarcasm and condescension in their supposed 'constructive criticism.' The head of Critics United has MA sex scenes in her stories.
Because of this you should come back to this website. i believe this because the post that fanfiction had on the mainpage was reminding everyone of the policy but did not say that they were doing a purge. it makes sense that they would remind us of this if they have been getting mass reports from the critics about stories. Hope this changes your mind!!
Here's some info I got from a reviewer named Rei concerning those responsible. The source of the purge has been found. A group of regular FF users, Critics United, will post any story they don't like on their forum. Then they have all their members mass report it until the story is deleted. In their forum they say they hope to cause another purge soon. They are not critics; they are bullies. They do not offer constructive criticism; they flame and poke fun. They like to call stories shit-fics, and call authors whose story they got deleted 'immature' and 'likely to bitch at them.' They often use heavy sarcasm and condescension in their supposed 'constructive criticism.' The head of Critics United has MA sex scenes in her stories.
Because of this you should come back to this website. i believe this because the post that fanfiction had on the mainpage was reminding everyone of the policy but did not say that they were doing a purge. it makes sense that they would remind us of this if they have been getting mass reports from the critics about stories. Hope this changes your mind!!
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July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. The pacing was nicely done and the story overall, brilliantly written.
I like the direction this fic is going and I can't wait to read more. :)
I like the direction this fic is going and I can't wait to read more. :)
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I check on this story every now and again to see if there is an update available, but it
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Will this still follow the original closely? I do not think Harry will only have little impact on the plot... I am rather excited with the changes!
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July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I hope the nesxt chapter comes soon.
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June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story so far please update soon
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story looking foward to the next bit
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter grest work and cant wate for chapter 3.
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June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
That is an interesting take, for Harry to be perceived as the successor to Aerion (even if it's just in a spiritual kind of way-- this one IS a dragon! Hilarious if he ends up with the animagus skill as a dragon). It is quite ironic, if that 'Brightflame' nick sticks, that Aerion the first wanted to be known as 'Brightflame', but was referred to as 'the Monstrous', and Aerion the second is called 'Brightflame' without wanting it so.
It would be quite interesting if Aerion's son turned out to be the founder of the Peverell House. He could be his grandfather or great-grandfather if it was true.
I really want to see Harry builds a power-base loyal to him, as he grows up in this life, there should be ways for him to acquire land too, and if he has(or not) acquire more money. And not see him like the Harry on your other story, to be so subordinate towards Cersei.
On a side note, Aerion seems to have been recorded to have had a Dragon Egg. There's nothing on what happened to it or where it is/was/went, it would be quite cool if it ends up in Harry's hands on a later time. It would be quite the right mess if at mid-game, another 'dance of the dragons' happened too!
I don't know how you plan to implement magic here, and I'm unsure if it's related with the Targaryen motto 'Blood and Fire', but Valyrian magic was rooted in Blood and Fire, if the westeros wiki is to be believed, it would really build up Harry's case if his style in using magic or at least the ones that are seen are made around that. Along with the 'Brightflame'... but I'm getting ahead of myself.
As for the lemon, I liked it. You did fine.
Him not resisting too much also makes sense, with the surprise and his past life coming to front and being in child's body. But I would expect for that not to happen again, at least, not without being a bit older and with some safety measures being taken, I'm assuming venereal deceases exist there, he should be more wary of it, with his modern education(or at least awareness). Bastards is another, doubt he wants children of any kind, I also doubt he wants to build up a persona of sleeping around, like Robert or Tyrion.
I AM looking forward to your next chapter, I do have to say that this website is quite a pain when waiting for updates, there being no alert function, no idea when there IS an update. I would be grateful if you posted in one that had one, or if you used FFnet to alert your readers, or something. It's a big inconvenience, really.
yourfanfiction seems to have one
hpfanficarhive has one too
That will, of course, NOT stop me from reading your story, though!
This is one of those stories that get me pumped up when I see an update, I really hope you get to finish it.
That is an interesting take, for Harry to be perceived as the successor to Aerion (even if it's just in a spiritual kind of way-- this one IS a dragon! Hilarious if he ends up with the animagus skill as a dragon). It is quite ironic, if that 'Brightflame' nick sticks, that Aerion the first wanted to be known as 'Brightflame', but was referred to as 'the Monstrous', and Aerion the second is called 'Brightflame' without wanting it so.
It would be quite interesting if Aerion's son turned out to be the founder of the Peverell House. He could be his grandfather or great-grandfather if it was true.
I really want to see Harry builds a power-base loyal to him, as he grows up in this life, there should be ways for him to acquire land too, and if he has(or not) acquire more money. And not see him like the Harry on your other story, to be so subordinate towards Cersei.
On a side note, Aerion seems to have been recorded to have had a Dragon Egg. There's nothing on what happened to it or where it is/was/went, it would be quite cool if it ends up in Harry's hands on a later time. It would be quite the right mess if at mid-game, another 'dance of the dragons' happened too!
I don't know how you plan to implement magic here, and I'm unsure if it's related with the Targaryen motto 'Blood and Fire', but Valyrian magic was rooted in Blood and Fire, if the westeros wiki is to be believed, it would really build up Harry's case if his style in using magic or at least the ones that are seen are made around that. Along with the 'Brightflame'... but I'm getting ahead of myself.
As for the lemon, I liked it. You did fine.
Him not resisting too much also makes sense, with the surprise and his past life coming to front and being in child's body. But I would expect for that not to happen again, at least, not without being a bit older and with some safety measures being taken, I'm assuming venereal deceases exist there, he should be more wary of it, with his modern education(or at least awareness). Bastards is another, doubt he wants children of any kind, I also doubt he wants to build up a persona of sleeping around, like Robert or Tyrion.
I AM looking forward to your next chapter, I do have to say that this website is quite a pain when waiting for updates, there being no alert function, no idea when there IS an update. I would be grateful if you posted in one that had one, or if you used FFnet to alert your readers, or something. It's a big inconvenience, really.
yourfanfiction seems to have one
hpfanficarhive has one too
That will, of course, NOT stop me from reading your story, though!
This is one of those stories that get me pumped up when I see an update, I really hope you get to finish it.
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June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the sex scene was good considering he couldn't really cum as he was physically ten years old. Though i suggest u don't add another sex scene until he can because on scene like that is alright but more seem like u're trying to fill in the blanks.