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September 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! So first I must say your story has taken up about three days of my life :) BUT im super happy that I found it at first I was worried that maybe this was an old fan fic and that you just stopped posting chapters so after reading all the chapters i was on a mission to find out how to review/post something about this story and find out if its still current. Long and behold after an hour of searching >_< I feel so stupid I found the button- review :)
SOOO wanted to say that I enjoy the story very very much. i have no idea into how much detail you can go when it comes to them being intimate but i enjoy it :) I enjoy the plot and where you are going with it and yeah there are typos but its not the end of the world. I look forward to reading more of your chapters :)
SOOO wanted to say that I enjoy the story very very much. i have no idea into how much detail you can go when it comes to them being intimate but i enjoy it :) I enjoy the plot and where you are going with it and yeah there are typos but its not the end of the world. I look forward to reading more of your chapters :)
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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your fic. Draco and Harry are a litte OC, but I still really like it.
I did find two grammatical errors in your last chapter. "Well, Millicent and Blaise told me that several Slytherins were attacked during the holidays. I was thinking that we could start a club where someone learns the Slytherins to defend themselves." Harry explained nervously.
That he wanted to learn his fellow students defend themselves showed that he was more comfortable with the fact that he was a Slytherin now.
"Learn" should be "teach".
I did find two grammatical errors in your last chapter. "Well, Millicent and Blaise told me that several Slytherins were attacked during the holidays. I was thinking that we could start a club where someone learns the Slytherins to defend themselves." Harry explained nervously.
That he wanted to learn his fellow students defend themselves showed that he was more comfortable with the fact that he was a Slytherin now.
"Learn" should be "teach".
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ginny and Pansy will never get it, will they? They both drive me nuts! So annoying. And Mrs. Weasley! What's it to her who Harry is with? Gah. Anyways, great chapter! Ooooo Ronnie boy better watch out! I can't wait to see what Draco does to him! And what did those glowing lights mean? Should I already know? Update soon!!
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this. Hate that Harry has to deal with alot but I hope the others get whats coming to them. YOu know Draco won't let them get away with it. HOpe to see more soon please.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
RONALD WEASLEY HOW COULD YOU!?!??!?! lol Poor Harry! :(
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, my compy was a bit tetchy from the site crash so i've recently been able to review again. in which case, have three chappies worth of review now. ^^
only the twisted mind of voldi would think of making dead ppl a chrissy present.
still, at least har and draco have the awkwardness sorted. They're still very new at being together but its very cute.
Awwww, poor siri. oh the joys of parenthood. :P Nice to know the twins are on side. they're very useful to know. At this point, i'm thinking it might just be safer for har to home school or switch to the french one. Hogwarts isn't being very welcoming and dumbles isn't helping one bit. Oh ho... guess who got hold of Sevies potions book neh?
A slyth DA what a most intriguing idea. I look forward to seeing how they handle it. oh, dear, plotting females are such a pest. That pansy is a worrying one.
Frot, frot, frot. Har and Draco go frot, frot, frot. Frot, frotting. ^^ they think that was good, just wait till they try in with the clothes off. ^^
You go Draco! *waves gay pride flag in the back ground. Tch, like his father is going to care. Pot, kettle and all of that. As for Mols... none of her biz really and like she'd be able to predict what Har's parents would have said. she didn't know them THAT well. :P
Ron, you little arse wipe... oh, he is SO going to pay for that! No wonder har freaked. He'd only just been discussing this and it was brought back in all it's frightening detail and then to have this happen. Oh, yeah, SOOOOOOOO going down.
only the twisted mind of voldi would think of making dead ppl a chrissy present.
still, at least har and draco have the awkwardness sorted. They're still very new at being together but its very cute.
Awwww, poor siri. oh the joys of parenthood. :P Nice to know the twins are on side. they're very useful to know. At this point, i'm thinking it might just be safer for har to home school or switch to the french one. Hogwarts isn't being very welcoming and dumbles isn't helping one bit. Oh ho... guess who got hold of Sevies potions book neh?
A slyth DA what a most intriguing idea. I look forward to seeing how they handle it. oh, dear, plotting females are such a pest. That pansy is a worrying one.
Frot, frot, frot. Har and Draco go frot, frot, frot. Frot, frotting. ^^ they think that was good, just wait till they try in with the clothes off. ^^
You go Draco! *waves gay pride flag in the back ground. Tch, like his father is going to care. Pot, kettle and all of that. As for Mols... none of her biz really and like she'd be able to predict what Har's parents would have said. she didn't know them THAT well. :P
Ron, you little arse wipe... oh, he is SO going to pay for that! No wonder har freaked. He'd only just been discussing this and it was brought back in all it's frightening detail and then to have this happen. Oh, yeah, SOOOOOOOO going down.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
spotted a few typos Butch in place of Budge and ranking in place of wracking... also, i thought har's pets were doing the invisible escort thing... if they weren't before you can bet they will be now.
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Boy Ron has really gone overboard! Is 'Mione as bad as Ron? I really like Blaise & Neville. Blaise is so sytherin but in a good way & Neville is so sweet, practical & tough in a quiet way so you don't know it until it's to late.
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September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maybe 'Mione & Ron have something to do with why all are angry with Harry. Hope everyone finds out soon that Harry had nothing to do with it.
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September 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, Glad Draco is by his side. MOre please.