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schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh, yeah, dumbles is really losing his touch, ne? heh, he's going to be beyond pissed but serves him right really. that might have worked if har had no real support like previous years but now he has a trio of Slyths watching out for him, one of whom is very highly placed and accustomed to dealing with messes like this. It also helps that that medi chickie actually did her job properly. So, :P to dumbles, better luck next time old goat.
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! And I'm glad Ginny got attacked-stupid girl! Can't to see the look on Dumble's face! :D
person delia cerrano
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for keeping the angst down. That Dumbledore! What horrors is that creepy crafty old man up to now?
I just don't trust him.
person Amelia
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the sex talk. U write really well, this story is so addictive and really funny. It's hard to read this and not laugh- i read it extremely late at night and I didn't want to wake people up. Keep going- so far I'd say - if using Harry potter grading- u recipe ex an O :)
person Sammy
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The ending... Oh my god... I am going to die waiting for next week... Keep up the great work I love your stories!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Abused Harry? What's that about? When was that supposed to happen?
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the match up of Snape and Lucius :) Gah, when will Nott, Pansy, Ginny, and Ron get theirs? They are so irritating! I like that Draco and Blaise got a one-up on Nott though, that was nice. Update soon!!
schedule September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, that ending was HOT!! Gah, stupid Nott, Pansy, and Ginny! Did they really think that would work? I liked your punishment for Ron! Very fitting ;) I hope Hermione comes to her senses! What does Dumbles have planned now? Now you've got me in suspense :) update soon!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad they couldn't break up Draco & Harry! Lucius & Snape? Cool, shouldn't have given in & married 'Cissa.
person unneeded
schedule September 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, lots of review fodder in this one. hmmm, considering he was pitching fits before har did recover from that pretty fast. Nothing like a Voldi vision to put things in perspective. har's going to have to adjust to draco's over protectiveness cause he's not going anywhere.
I'm glad his pets have that rune thing going on, with both V and dumbles against them they need all the edge they can get.
Nott for spy? yeah, i think so. It's painfully obvious that he wanted into draco's pants and thats so not happening now. That's plan was pretty juvenile as well. it would only work if har and draco didn't talk to each other.
glad mio is starting to get a clue which probably won't keep her from doing something dumb. if ronnikins wants back with har he's sure going about it the wrong way.
"rub his sleep" did you mean rub his eyes?
Nooooooo, don't let bad happen to Siri. Har neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeddddds him!
I'm glad the 'plan' was so fail. I can understand why draco wasn't anxious to tell har of his man whoring ways. but now that's cleared up that trio of troublemakers will have to figure out something else.
tch, for men of class the malfoys, sr and jr are utterly cheesy.