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June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The world's gone mad indeed. Excellent work though I absolutely adore this fic! Draco is all seven levels of adorable, and Harry's reactions are prime. Snape though is my favorite so far after Draco. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story this was a great start.Are we going to end up with a third side to this war?
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've actually read this on fanfiction. In fact I've read most of your stories there. I'm so happy to be re-reading it. In fact I can't even wait for the next chapter so I found it on fanfiction again so I could re-read it now. But I wanted to thank you for one of my favorite stories!! ^_^
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! I love it!
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June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The next chapter is going to be good. Hope more is to come soon please. I will try to wait but,...I can't. Hope things go well for everyone.
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June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Too fast... too fast for me!
I really liked the idea for this story and how Draco found that book. I don't think Malfoy would have to convince the cup of anything because his fighting with Draco and being a leader in his house would already make the cup likely to chose him. And even though Draco is a leader in his house, I wouldn't see the cup chosing him because it would know that he has feelings for another house member so he wouldn't need it.
Chapter two had a lot of really great points brought up by Lucius but I just can't see Lupin and especially Sirius being so buddy buddy with the Malfoys that quick. It would take a lot longer for the Malfoys to be trusted and I think they would be suspicious a lot longer until they proved themselves.
Trading favors is what a Malfoy does so I kind of expected more of that. All the anger at Dumbledore seemed a bit much too all at once. Again... finding things out gradually and then losing trust in him and some of his decisions would be more believable.
Draco was really good though and I totally love how you wrote Snape. It was so funny and in character how he asked why he had to go get Harry and that he didn't want to see him sooner than he had to. Loved that :)
I really liked the idea for this story and how Draco found that book. I don't think Malfoy would have to convince the cup of anything because his fighting with Draco and being a leader in his house would already make the cup likely to chose him. And even though Draco is a leader in his house, I wouldn't see the cup chosing him because it would know that he has feelings for another house member so he wouldn't need it.
Chapter two had a lot of really great points brought up by Lucius but I just can't see Lupin and especially Sirius being so buddy buddy with the Malfoys that quick. It would take a lot longer for the Malfoys to be trusted and I think they would be suspicious a lot longer until they proved themselves.
Trading favors is what a Malfoy does so I kind of expected more of that. All the anger at Dumbledore seemed a bit much too all at once. Again... finding things out gradually and then losing trust in him and some of his decisions would be more believable.
Draco was really good though and I totally love how you wrote Snape. It was so funny and in character how he asked why he had to go get Harry and that he didn't want to see him sooner than he had to. Loved that :)
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June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read this over at FanFiction.net but was depressed when parts were cut :( I understand, but know I have to wait to read the "good stuff" lol It was a good story and I cannot wait for the sequel! I did notice some word and grammar issues and was wondering if the story was going to be re-edited before being posted here? Just curious, but I really liked the story! I will be reading it again here, but may not be able to always review a chapter. I will try though!! Keep up the good story telling! :)
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June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the idea is most interesting but watch those typos.
what will draco do if har isn't picked...after all, there's no gaurantee that it will be har chosen. Besides, would switching har to Slyth put in increasing amounts of danger... seems rather unfair to the puff and claw as well. The claw will be being stunted without their usual intellectual company and the puff may not have the right mind set or event the intelligence to cope well as a claw.
what will draco do if har isn't picked...after all, there's no gaurantee that it will be har chosen. Besides, would switching har to Slyth put in increasing amounts of danger... seems rather unfair to the puff and claw as well. The claw will be being stunted without their usual intellectual company and the puff may not have the right mind set or event the intelligence to cope well as a claw.
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter is good, but could you update soon?