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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a good update. I love how draco and harry are getting along and hope to see more progress soon. Update again soon please the suspence kills me
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July 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loveee this story..it's so fun to watch the developments between Harry and Draco..they are too cute..Also, I love watching Sirius and Remus...Sirius cracks me up..love him in this story..he's a fun character. I just love everything about this story..and I really can't wait to read more! It's very awesome! :)
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm nice story but kinda went 'eh?' at the part at chapter 7 where while they were both being asses harry jumped to malfoy's defense only and chewed ron out for the things he said while anyone with the history they have would assume the worst about malfoy and his attitude doesn't help his case.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm well i hope that at the very least harry stays best friends with Hermione (who has in the books at least always had his back and trusts him when everyone else abandons him) and she can serve to make Draco and to a lesser extent lucius more likable and force them to re-think there opinion on anyone who they don't believe meets there standards, cause lets be for real, there both still smug jerkasses lol and I just don't see the kind of friendship harry and Hermione have breaking so easily even in a pro-malfoy/slytherin attitude harry fic.again very nice story and I'm not complaining, just stating my hopes.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
as much as I love ron, why does he have to be such an ass ALL the time? He should learn to be open-minded and accept that his bestie wants to be friends with his former enemy! I mean come on! and that dream Harry had: YIKES!!!!!!
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That is an awesome cute update. I wonder if Lucius and Severus are a couple. I'm sure we will find out in the up coming chapters. Update again soon please.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like that he has the twins helping him keep Ron in line.
If Ron can't control his mouth/? Or Hermione listen to Harry and trust his judgement? I hope Sirius tells Molly that Ron(and Hermione if she don't change) are NOT welcome there. They can stay at the Burrow untio Hogwarts resumes.
If Ron can't control his mouth/? Or Hermione listen to Harry and trust his judgement? I hope Sirius tells Molly that Ron(and Hermione if she don't change) are NOT welcome there. They can stay at the Burrow untio Hogwarts resumes.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
har was a little Ooc but not too bad. I mean he jumped on Ron awfully quickly when a week or two previous he would have been agreeing with him. I har just going to chuck over his two former BF's?
there were several typos and mis used words in this one to. You really do have trouble with those tenses don't you.
there were several typos and mis used words in this one to. You really do have trouble with those tenses don't you.
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think the beginnings of a crush is coming and fast too. HOpe more is to come soon please.
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i spotted some typos so keep an eye on that...
Well, i suppose har will just have to get used to his new style. Still, he should be allowed at least one or two things he's comfortable in.
this chappie seemed mostly filler but you need them sometimes to give the background for other stuff.
Well, i suppose har will just have to get used to his new style. Still, he should be allowed at least one or two things he's comfortable in.
this chappie seemed mostly filler but you need them sometimes to give the background for other stuff.