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Love!

loved it, and am now going to read the sequel :):)

Interesting that the two pets bought by the Malfoys so resemble the animals on the vault door right down to the eyes at least I think it was a snake not a dragon. I think they are going to be excellent protectors for Harry. I also think that Sapphire is more than just a normal cat, and she has very excellent taste. This is a great story even with the occasional word mix ups, actually seems to fit the story more that way lol. The two boys are mates the vault already confirms that but will be interesting to see how it all plays well. I like this Snape still bad ass but with a hidden heart for harry.

I enjoyed this very much, it was well writen--- if only some things were not right with how they were presented...
I had a question with this, seeing as luc switched sides how was he still a spy if it was known that he switched exactly?


~eros

I have liked this but now that the 'light' side is continuously more cunning and sceming and more succesful than the dark or grey, this is getting very annoying to read. I'm continuously thinking why are harry and co this stupid. Why dont they react. Do something, anything besides take it all.

Why arent harrys pets protecting him? Everytime something happens, theyre gone so it seems theyre pretty useless.
And if harry cant win over ron in a fight, then harry can hardly win over anyone..

This was a nice story. I liked the beginning before they went to hogwarts. It seemed ore thought out and ot was way more cuddly and relationship heavy. At hogwarts is became much darker amd kinda plot oriented. On top of that there were suddenly many more relationships and smaller plots to take time off the main pairing.
And of course, maybe because the story was so long, some facts got distorted and logic forgotten. Also the unending angst against harry got heavier and heavier so the last chapters werent very fun to read. Hard to skip as well considering the time i already spent reading this.
But overall i liked this. If i could change something, id keep the lighter feeling from the beginning going on and not make ron seem so super.

Love the story and can't wait for the sequel to be updated. ^_^

I'm having fun reading this, despite the OOC-ness and typos. I'd call it a "crack" fic, cause it is SO very different from the actual books, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing, just something readers might need to be aware of going in.

Also, I had to snort at the amount of money the Potters apparently had. 3 billion for Remus and a billion for Sirius while still leaving a huge sum for Harry? I wish I could even imagine that amount of money.

I wanted to let you know that your Story is just WONDERFUL !! I Love it Not only is it one that shows that The Malfoys as Good People But you have showed Draco and Harry in a Fantastic way!! If you will take a suggestion I would love mpreg to be part of it let Harry and Draco have that Family or something to that effect any great wonderful story you are the B.E.S.T. :)