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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person SParker
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #37..

You just gotta love Luna. :-)
As a matter of fact she was my 2nd choice as Harry's
girlfriend/wife, Hermione being a strong 1st...who says
the redheads HAD to be with anyone?

Anyway, it's about time Harry said something...and yes a child [Teddy]
that age would feel a little misplaced if the parent they doted on
suddenly becomes preoccupied with a baby, no less than the actual pregnancy
itself. It's rare you find a child who is accepting, but that doesn't mean
there are not many out there.

You just don't hear about them.
person qwerty
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Teddy :(

good chapter
person A_Lexus
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg this is an amazing story i love it! really susissous of luna being the kidnaper i hope they find out soon.i love the relationships in this story. will harry ever find out how much snape cares about him? poor teddy i totally cryed at the last bit i hope snapes going relise whats wronge with teddy and help him through.i love it i hope you carry on writting xxx
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awwww teddy. i just want to grab him and huggle him to bits. he's so insecure. i know har's life has been nuts but how'd he miss that.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh sobs, weeping & tears! Poor Teddy!! He's a godson not a son, there's Scorpius, now a new "real" child. Teddy must be freaking out!! And he is not going to show it because he wants to be perfect in order to keep his place in the family.
Talk about angst...I may just skim the next couple of chapters because I tend to identify to easily. Maybe Snape can help? As tough talking as he is he still seems very loyal & loving to a chosen few. He would also understand & recognize feeling left out & scared of being unloved & unimportant from his own life. Of course Draco or Harry could notice the change in
Teddy (trying to be perfect). Draco could earn points with Harry for fixing it & maybe proving to Teddy he is noticed & loved for his own self.
person Claudia
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
God I feel so sorry for Teddy.. I can imagine he isn't happy with it. Loved what Harry did to healer Rowland though! =]
Thank you X
person bcjink
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was clever, I like it when Harry lets his Slytherin side out to play. I also absolutely love Luna, she may seem flighty,but she's really so smart and intuitive. I felt so bad for Teddy, just wanted to hug him. Hoping someone can help him get over those issues some day. Looking forward to the next!
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like that Harry still has all his magic while having a baby, usually in fics there is a tendancy to make Harry into some weakling. I#m glad you havent yet :)

Looking forward to the next chapter
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
welp, announcing their engagement to the kids went well. lets see how they weather the news of har's pregnancy.
oh, that's such a relief that all those ppl will be okay now. what the hell did that nut bar get out poisoning those ppl anyway.
still, i feel har and draco are playing into his hands by keeping the baby. babies and pregnant ppl are very vulnerable.
person bcjink
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I'm glad they will all get their 'HEA'. Grrr that stupid healer better watch it. He actually makes me suspicious, seems like a sketchy character to me. I'm super happy that Teddy reassured Harry that he was good with he and Draco getting married. I have a feeling though, that his reaction to the baby might be a doozey. Aah is it Friday yet lol! Thanks for updating, I look forward to the next,take care! :)